DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Posted

Great writing and story, but I would not agree that it is complete. It ends abruptly without true resolution, and I don’t like starting something I can’t ever finish.

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Fantasy · Rowyrn Kafka

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Posted

The story does not produce an emotional connection with the characters or the story. It has good potential, but had it been any longer, I probably wouldn’t have finished it because it feels rushed and underdeveloped.

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Fantasy · Blackwolfrose01

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Posted

I would give it a zero if I could, just to let you know that only the intro remains and the rest is posted elsewhere. Don’t get interested in the beginning because it’s not nearly finished.

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Fantasy · JMFelic

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Posted

Probably a good story line, but I cannot get past the writing - jumbled timeline, strange dialogue, and unnecessary explanations of certain topics. There was too much that didn’t make sense so I eventually couldn’t finish it.

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Fantasy · Inara_Me

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Commented

Well…I did not expect expect this chapter to end on that note. I’m most pleasantly surprised & can’t wait to read what happens next! 😏

ch 13 Chapter 13: The Decision Belongs to Stella

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Fantasy · Jessie King

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Commented

Thank the Luna Kane & the missus live!

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Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

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No! He can’t go yet! 😭

ch 110 Powers Of The Mate Bond

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DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

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Agreed! Love that small moment of fireworks at the end!

ch 109 KARMA

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2yr

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So glad they weren’t kidnapped or killed 🙌🏼

ch 105 The Target

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DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

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She’s a force to be reckoned with! Don’t stop now, Aila!

ch 99 The Rogues

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2yr

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That bish should’ve lost her hand at least for touching Aila.

ch 89 B*tches Still Scheming

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Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz

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2yr

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In Finn’s defense, Damon didn’t start strategizing on what else to do to protect Aila in his absence other than the gun.

ch 86 Hitman?!

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Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

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Agreed! I’m so proud of her!

ch 84 Hollie's Messages

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Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

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😂😂

ch 83 Trinity-Antagonizing A Rabid Dog/Wolf

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Fantasy · Deni_Chance

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Commented

Go mom. Someone needed to get it through his thick skull.

ch 81 Reece-Another Lecture From Mom

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Fantasy · Deni_Chance

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Commented

Just 2 chapters ago, in Reece’s reflection he admitted he never hated her. I had hoped he would add that to his explanation to her that what he said was wrong, but they still have more progress to make anyway so there’s still time 💓

ch 77 Reece-New Year's Date With Little Bunny

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Fantasy · Deni_Chance

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Replied to Emmie81

Yes…Finally!

ch 77 Reece-New Year's Date With Little Bunny

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Fantasy · Deni_Chance

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Replied to justalittle5150

Yes! I admire her for this!

ch 74 Trinity-Under The Stars

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Fantasy · Deni_Chance

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Commented

He keeps having opportunity-after-opportunity to be completely honest with her, and he just thinks he can change the nature of their relationship without mending the broken parts 🤦🏻‍♀️ #TeamTrinity

ch 74 Trinity-Under The Stars

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Fantasy · Deni_Chance

DaoistgNTUEK2

2yr

Posted

Not finished reading yet, but from what I have read thus far, this book is wonderful - deep back story, purposeful character development, steamy werewolf love. I can’t wait for more.

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