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Nice idea.Too many grammatical errors, improve on what you have and it'll be a fine piece of work. Hope you keep uploading.............................

ahh dont make me feel bad beans.I took the bullets out.I only shoot blanks XD

:D:D i'll work hard

when I read this chapter I felt confused.Don't know if this is a result of me reading fast,my intelligence or you.You are very grammatically correct which is more than i could ever hope for on this site.I dont really get where the plot could go from this chapter.Your pacing is just fine.Didnt feel too slow or too fast. But this is just the first chapter my misgivings can alwasy be concluded by you hopefully you continue to improve on your work and keep on going. Bes of luck to you!

Shameless author review.If you got a problem with it,let it seeth in your soul and read my novel to extinguish that fire.If you are here I implore you to leave your reviews(only good ones tho XD)jkjk.Still tho please support ,give power stones,share with your friends. If you read this far Thank you!

This novel has potential if the author slows down more and puts thought into his scenes. Currently the novels feels like a speedrun which is very tiring to read.I hope u succeed in ur endevours.I gave u a five star rating because there is no use in putting down an author.Less than that will only negatively impact u.Anyway nice work hope u keep it up