Webnovel Author: GhostDost - Fanfic Collection

This novel was preety good but like wmw you ended it very fast , in last 100 chapters you really ruined a good novel. Most importantly bro you are not very good with numbers, years, age concept

It's interesting story, But it's literally too slow, first 50 chapter and not even 2 hrs has been passed. I get it you want a slow pace but this is too much considering length of the chapters are also small.

Out of 100 Chinese novels 90 are copy paste, with bad ageing, grammer, and utter nonsense . Other 6-7 are bearable, and rest are good. After reading 30-40 Chinese novels I came to a conclusion that they love face slapping too much and they don't know anything about romance in real life and they hate other race people.

It should be renamed as My Pushover system. It's a good story as well as bad. He is just a Pushover character. He is gutless, he wants to avoid trouble but the system give him no choice but to be nose picked by other characters. But overall story is not bad, if you can accept a Pushover main character.

It was a good story man. I read all the chapters. But when it was getting more interesting you stopped, what a let down. I think you should restart writting it again.

The only problem with this novel is it's inconsistent levels and experience points. It's frustrating Sometimes he gets to much point in killing a high level monster sometimes very less I really don't get it man Is your maths really that bad author san Author please correct it

All was going good until he became rank 6 afterwards it felt like the author was possessed by cringey Chinese web novel author, Unnecessary arrogance, demeaning others, too much selfish, and too much showing off.

What a let down. First few chapters were good but then like mostly every chinese authors this novel become trash. I don't get what the obsession about nerfing the MC. Like su mei was chasing mc in cultivation then she surpassed him and becomes super talented it was at this point that I start hating this novel. And then almost everybody surpassed him and it took mc 800 ch to complete 2nd level of his cultivation like what the fuck. In next arch it become boring to read it and any chapter can be skipped It will matter not. Amature author.

Typical Chinese novel but with western names. Power levels are annoying. Too much cliches. Like all typical Chinese reincarnator with no background in previous life,but becomes a scientist and inventor in this life smarter than everybody. Harem seeker. Brain dead female leads and other characters. Many paragraphs can be skipped in any chapter. But readable because mc is not too arrogant, which is very rare in Chinese novels.

I am a newbie so I will try to improve my writing skills. It will be different from other novels. I will not force any interaction between my mc and original character