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I like how the story develops. Usually when a main character becomes too powerful by age 3 (Jonin level or something) it's off-putting, but here it makes sense that he became a seal master at that age (and the desire, and the backstory, and the adult mind, everything leads to this). In other aspects of further development, the main thing is to try not to go too far. A kid who can beat up a kage seems funny. (But the choice of how to develop the story is yours, the author. I'm not asking you to change your story, that's just my opinion). Thanks for your hard work.

Мне нравится история, жду выхода новых глав!) Хотя любопытно кто будет любовные интересом главного героя и будет ли он вообще? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Мне нравится, хороший сюжет, интересно посмотреть на взаимодействие персонажей. Главный герой не собирает девушек как покемонов. И не похоже что его единственная цель это стать самым сильным для того чтобы... Просто чтобы быть самым сильным. Он что-то создаёт, развивает свой пантентон, набирает людей, пока что не упирается своей крутость. Так что жду будущих взаимодействий с главными героями и его семьёй, а также реакции их реакции на всё это.

Thank you for your work, it is a pleasure to read this work. Looking forward to the next chapters. Hello to the author. Not 5 full stars because I don't want it to seem like the review was written by a bot)

The story is very interesting and easy to read, I look forward to each chapter. Author, keep up the good work![img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins]

Great story, it's just a pity that it ended at the most interesting place. It remains only to wait for the author to return to this work in the future ...

It's always interesting to read good non-Konoha fanfiction. It's a shame it was abandoned, but it's still a good story. There is no nonsense about how the GG suddenly becomes a super scientist after death, versed in genetic engineering better than Orochimaru, there is no chasing tailed beasts, nor creating them, as if this is the solution to all the problems in the world, the GG does not go to put other people's eyes on himself in all holes just because they have cool abilities. This is a story about a guy with a not too moronic golden finger who gets out of all the trouble with his mind and plot armor that is not annoying when reading.