BiskaIlichina - Profile

I've spent hours of reading this and have come to love it! The author has a great sense of story telling. Aside from a very strong start, the action never stops! The way the details are presented isn't neglect and not too wordy to be boring. Even when the chapter without fights are exciting the way that the characters are develop. I'm supporting this work all the way. I'm halfway through and if the first 20 chapters are great and exciting, be prepared for your breath to be taken away. 😘 Best of luck.

I think the overall plot is interestingly good. There are lapses in the writing, sometimes repetitive but understandable for a new author and work so theres room to improve. Still, it has great potential to be a success.

Maybe too early to give a review but the beginning seems really interesting. Although the development seems to lag sometimes but it was necessary to develop the relationship of the characters. If this has a stable update, then it could be a successful book.