Webnovel Author: RomanceFanatic028 - Novel Collection

So far I read till chapter 5 because the chapter were so short. I didn’t realised I was there. Okay, so the characters were interesting. I loved the way you wrote dialogue. It seemed relatable. Everything was good but I noticed in some places you used comma instead of fullstop. Reread the chap and edit it out. Overall nice read. All the best author.