22fallenangels

6mth

Commented

He* could be cut into pieces

Ling Yi looked at his daughter who was still sleeping and frowning, wishing that she could be cut into pieces.

A woman selling vegetables,Her husband is the Immortal Emperor

Urban · Belinda_Yang_1619

22fallenangels

6mth

Replied to Antonio_sShort

You sound like you've read alot of kingdom building webnovels. Any recommendations? Especially ones with quite abit of wars involved like city of sin.

Taking the Mafia to the Magic World

Fantasy · RVN_1998

22fallenangels

11mth

Posted

Storyline is good, but damn, the grammar leaves much to be desired. Alright, I'm not that picky if you're using the wrong words at times or if there are certain misspelled words. But it absolutely urks me when you miss out basic grammatical words like "a" and "the". If you're someone like me thats extremely picky with grammar, then this might not be for you. If you can't care less about the grammar, then it might just be a good read for you.

22fallenangels

1yr

Commented

is valuel a word or is it a typo? because ive attempted to search up its meaning and did not manage to get any results. please enlighten me.

"That is why Baudrillard considers 'things' and 'requirements' as false symbols. He criticized Marx's labor theory of value1, believing he had fallen into the trap of capitalism and political economy. He then even proposed his own idea of political economy." Wu Qiren finished his presentation. He opened up his last slide and nodded his thanks to the teacher and his classmates. Upon the teacher's signal, he left the podium and awaited the next classmate's presentation.

Kingdom's Bloodline

Fantasy · Masterless Sword

22fallenangels

1yr

Commented

i love that the author had added this slightly indepth detail. Hoping to see some water added into the dungeon soon lol

These plants would feed on the dungeon's mana instead of the nutrients from the soil. Thus he didn't need to worry about photosynthesis or irrigation.

Sin System: Demonic Harem After Reincarnation

Fantasy · FireEngine

22fallenangels

1yr

Commented

whats the name of the poem (the chinese name would do)

[1] This is a very interesting poem, where it laments how our first impressions of others are often not representative of how they are really like, hence the abandonment and neglect that comes later when we discover their 'true selves'.

My Wife Is A General Who Killed Tens Of Thousands On The Battlefield

Eastern · My Daughter is too Cute

22fallenangels

1yr

Posted

I had read this book thrice, and for the first two times, I couldn't get pass how dull the first 20 or so chapters were. On the 3rd try, I realised that the later parts of the book is actually pretty amazing. However, I dislike the fact that the characters don't seem to invoke any of my emotions. I don't sense the desperation from the characters as they struggle through a situation. The writing and large scale battles do give off a sense of anticipation and thrill though, so i particularly enjoy those parts. Overall, not my favourite but somewhere up there in my list.

Trash Of The Count’s Family

Fantasy · ohcocanuts

22fallenangels

1yr

Posted

Honestly, the plot is actually pretty good. The main idea revolving around this novel feels similar to tales of demons and gods. But my brain is being affected by all the random errors in the sentence structure and whatnot. Yes, I saw the warning about English not being the writer's native language, but I'm reading to mostly improve my vocabulary and chill as I read along. So i find it particularly disturbing when I find myself trying to correct his errors in my head instead of enjoying the plot of the novel. idk man, if yall aren't affected by the grammar, then go ahead and read on.

Way of the Knights

Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow

22fallenangels

1yr

Commented

is to form a contract with anyone.

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Author Got an SSS Class to Fight His Own MC

Fantasy · Herolich

22fallenangels

1yr

Posted

By any chance, does anyone have any recommendations for novels that have a similar writing style? Like a rather philosophical nature with a good plot. ( or something similar to "The villian wants to live", would be nice too :) )

SSS-Class Suicide Hunter

Fantasy · System_LookingGuy

22fallenangels

1yr

Posted

The first ever novel I read and I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. I love the way the story flows and the hilarious elements in it. However, the author seemed to have completely halted progress on the novel itself and has been focusing on the manga version. Recommend reading it if you are okay with the story probably not being finished.

Tales of Demons and Gods

Eastern · Mad Snail

22fallenangels

2yr

Posted

lets be honest, I don't deserve anything from writing something like that. My english teacher would feel disappointed. erm yep, I kinda need to write more words, to publish this comment. Thats abt it.

A Cliché

Realistic · 22fallenangels

22fallenangels

2yr

Posted

Really pleasing to see something that is against the ever so cliche novels of protagonist gaining systems and proceeding to dominate the world. At least there is now a good reason why systems are offered to people who are seemingly at their wit's end. Great read so far.

I Hate Systems

Fantasy · Overlord_Venus

22fallenangels

2yr

Commented

eh, I would prefer if the author just said that "humans were physically weaker compared to the monsters" since it sounds better and slightly more grammatically accurate but :/ it is what it is i guess

Humans may be less tough and strong than the monsters, but their schemes as well as viciousness knew no end to their depth. From Patroski's unexpected betrayal, to him misjudging Anton, deep down, Viktor has to swallow his anxiety about going into the nearest survivor city.