Webnovel Author: glass_explosions - Novel Collection

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To be honest, I wasn't expecting much from this book- I came here thinking I'd be reading your any other stereotypical alpha novel, but the author has given me a pleasant surprise. With its hooking first chapter and the way this story is progressing, it makes me want to read more. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but they didn't affect the plot at all. Added to my library. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep it up, author!

Thank you! I'll try to.

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An interesting story with a cool concept. A charming romance that any romance enjoyer would surely like. Additionally, the author makes the action scenes quite enjoyable, so you'll never get bored. With little to no mistakes, I can see this story's potential if the author keeps posting. I look forward to seeing what this novel becomes. Keep up the great work!

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Though there are quite a few repetitive words and some work that is needed on character dialogues, this novel is a lot more readable than most Webnovel stories out there. With the interesting, hooking first few chapters, anyone who loves demons and the beginning of a cool conquering would love this novel. Putting aside a few grammatical errors, with the way the story is uniquely presented, you can easily push those flaws to the side. TL;DR - It's a good story with a lot of potential, so go read it.

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So far, an interesting novel with nice lessons from the father character, as well as an interesting storyline. However, in the first chapter, there are too many commas in each sentence and many run-on sentences. It gets better after that chapter, but there are still many wrong tenses used, the characters don't really speak their age, and there's incorrect character quotation punctuations and capitalizations (ex- "back then, these were the days!." should become "Back then, those were the days!" To the author, I suggest researching a bit more on quotations by reading physical books in the english language). But these are all pretty small things if you ignore them and just read the story. Pretty good overall, I would definitely keep reading if the author releases more chapters. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next!

This is looking to be the start of a really good novel. The punctuations and run-on sentences could definitely be fixed, though. But if you ignore it, the story itself is amazing. A good read for those who enjoy demon-related novels.

not bunched up chapters, but bunched up paragraphs. maybe limit the paragraphs to 3 or 5 sentences long?