XX_Rach1

11mth

Posted

Too many words to say i can't put them all, but I'll say the most important one, this is the best novel i have ever read. Okay damn it we're doing this. One notable thing is the vocabulary, a lot of times i see words i don't even know about and I'm forced to check the dictionary thereby learning a new word each time. Second is the phenomenal piece of writing, this writing is beyond what I ever thought possible, from the start all could do was mouth "wow" countless times before I got used to it, the the intricate details speaks of how knowledgeable the writer must be to be able to create this masterpiece. I have read fantasy, wuxia, and many more, but they can't compare to this, the perfect setting also says a lot, a lot of football are unaware of many DRC footballers, if you ask me i can't even name one, so i think the setting was perfect, from rags to fame. I am currently at 385, and i just said i can't keep all this thoughts to myself any longer, the journey is smooth the writer makes sure not to make mistakes. Having a system does not guarantee talent, so he devoted himself into training like a madman that even a critic like me actually commends him without thinking of the system, and that was not how I thought at first but his efforts changed my view. I'm also trying to be a writer, so reading this book also helps me in many ways. I already wrote a full chapter 🙆 (this last comment might be biased but, personally and because of my habit to focus on only myself i was kind of drawn to Zachary more when I figured he was also a guy to forget everything else and focus on training, so i was kind of shocked and unhappy when he started Camila especially after what I thought was going to be a 'ONS'. Having a girl is okay though, i have no worries it just kinda annoys me a little especially when he acts roleplay😩

XX_Rach1

2yr

Posted

Interesting at first but for this took a 360 when he developed the habit of laying every woman he comes across, even his own mother, coupled with the fact that you will never let him lose a fight. I stopped reading when you made him send his soldiers to conquer all the worlds, and we know we'll enough that he is not even stronger than the Overlord and Warden combined so why haven't they gone and conquer all the worlds, that thing is unrealistic for me, an where you F'd up was when you said "when you get to earth enslave all the men and capture the women."

XX_Rach1

2yr

Replied to abd_pd

Nope...they die, Suzan gets depressed, the kid gets guilty conscience and innu gets angry, then Gary gets angry then the howlers gets angry.....I swear if even one of those kids survive.... idk but it's looks impossible and I hope it is

ch 287 Clash of the beasts

XX_Rach1

2yr

Commented

.....

Han Sen returned to his room, tied the copper-toothed beast to a cage and put the black crystal in front of it. The beast gobbled up the black crystal greedily.

XX_Rach1

2yr

Replied to SanchoPanza

haha

ch 154 Chapter 152: Mother And Daughter (Part-1)

The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)

Urban · Roeselawik

XX_Rach1

2yr

Commented

hmm

"There's no point in acting stealthy," interrupted Han Xiao through the intercom. "Black Spider has already discovered you all."

XX_Rach1

2yr

Replied to Daniel_Prosper_9240

yeah

ch 0 1 NOTE: Not a chapter just an explanation

XX_Rach1

2yr

Replied to Asdfg_Hjkl_7626

🤣🤣

For some horrifying reason, her rock-hard cheeks are tinged red. She even winks at me in a somewhat flirtatious way— sending chills down my spine.

The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)

Urban · Roeselawik

XX_Rach1

2yr

Commented

Sect Master Nangong when she finally realizes the real reason. "You Dick!"

Nie Li could not help but think, Am I a little too shameless? After some thought, he said, "This is for the Heavenly Note Sect's wellbeing. Only single men would devote themselves completely. With their protection, the Heavenly Note Sect will definitely be safe and secure."

Tales of Demons and Gods

Eastern · Mad Snail

XX_Rach1

2yr

Commented

whyyy!!

Upon seeing the disciples in a daze, Li Xingyun pointed at the crowd and said, "Don't you understand? Sect Master's intent is to pass the decree for all of you to hit on chicks. Sect Master said that all of you are unable to bring back a chick after heading to the Heavenly Note Sect, it would be a disgrace to our Divine Feathers Sect. They shall be expelled from the sect, never to be accepted in again. If you bring back a kid, you would be strengthening our sect. Such a meritorious service would be rewarded with ten Sacred Elixirs. If two kids are brought back, they would be rewarded with thirty Sacred Elixirs. Do you now understand!?"

Tales of Demons and Gods

Eastern · Mad Snail

XX_Rach1

2yr

Commented

😎😎

Li Xingyun suddenly smiled enigmatically. "Apart from protecting the Heavenly Note Sect, Sect Master will be entrusting all of you with an even more important mission. That is… you are to bring a bunch of kids back."

Tales of Demons and Gods

Eastern · Mad Snail

XX_Rach1

2yr

Commented

😁😁

Decreed to Hit On Chicks

Tales of Demons and Gods

Eastern · Mad Snail

XX_Rach1

2yr

Commented

Bro why do you always make villains have good first and impressions all the time🤔

“I never expected Younger Cousin Xingyun to be here as well. Since you’re here, come, let us sit together!” Li Yufeng laughed. “I never imagined that Younger Cousin Xingyun would also have the money to buy the Celestial Treasure Pavilion’s artifacts!”

Tales of Demons and Gods

Eastern · Mad Snail

XX_Rach1

2yr

Commented

But holup don't they eat, as in food!👀👀🧐🤔🤨

Nie Li looked towards, Yu Yan who was cultivating in the distance. The golden flames on body were blazing more than ever, looking like a cloud of golden fire in the sky. Nie Li had no idea how far Yu Yan’s cultivation had reached. Since she was still in the middle of cultivating, he didn’t want to disrupt her.