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2021-09-03 Joined Germany

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Woah, so many they‘s in one paragraph O.o

They were at a gas station looking for food that they could use. They were low after having been on the road for a while and they didn't want to run out while they were leaving the city. They had gathered a generous amount of supplies when they heard a loud crash in the distance. They finished storing their supplies and ran outside to see what the commotion was. When they got outside they looked towards the edge of the city where a few skyscrapers were located. On the top of the 2nd tallest skyscraper was a pair of Griffins ripping apart the building, most likely fighting someone, they were quite a ways away but since the griffins were in between them and the city's outskirts. They knew that they would have to fight the two griffins.

From Normalcy to Fantasy

From Normalcy to Fantasy

Fantasy · BattleTracs

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Not gonna show nudity-esque stuff HERE
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Over time they saw his hair getting longer and darker while his limbs seem to be getting slightly shorter. When Mason flipped over to face his parents they noticed that the area around his chest was getting more pronounced(he was wearing clothes, not gonna show nudity-esque stuff here.) They also noticed blue accents on the end of his now longer hair that reached his hips but that wasn't going to do much to distract them.

From Normalcy to Fantasy

From Normalcy to Fantasy

Fantasy · BattleTracs

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Ah found the british :D

"Could you bring over the minced garlic jar in the fridge? After that the biscuits will be ready." said Mrs. Kondark while stirring around the pasta in the pot.

From Normalcy to Fantasy

From Normalcy to Fantasy

Fantasy · BattleTracs

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Why? It is two cute girls hugging O.o
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Touched by her words, Miyata also returned the hug with another which lasted for a few seconds. A few men also directed dagger like stares to Miyata but she gave it no thought and continued anyways.

Ascendance Online

Ascendance Online

Fantasy · Potatopon

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Can you describe the other team? I mean they got the first place, how do they look to Jess?

First place went to the other team that had a person who wasn't tired. That much is obvious saying that they have the advantage. Sure, my team had one person in good condition, but I got stabbed so that isn't necessarily true anymore.

The World's Shift

The World's Shift

Fantasy · Xubx

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With hard work and dedication to one goal you can reach any height ^-^ Your writing got better, but it still feels a bit too rushed oftentimes. I‘d try to flesh out the characters, since if you are writing from different perspectives it‘s gonna be especially important :0 Thanks for the chapter though =)
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Tale Of The Unbound

Tale Of The Unbound

Fantasy · Terminate0R

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