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Doctor_Blue

Doctor_Blue

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Trying to write a good story, chapter by chapter!😁😅

2021-10-05 Joined Japan

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Hahhhh~ Here's the thing: At first, the story was unique and felt like a breath of fresh air; Now, however, it just falling deep into trash pit. Short explanation- The training arc for MC was pretty good and interesting: with the eternal gennin and reserve forces. The fights with rogue nin and root nin were one of the few good ones. Slowly, the whole story turned into a freaking dark teen crime drama(which I commented in paragraphs too). The MC learned genjutsu from Uchiha clan lady and then saved, or at least sent a letter full of information to them, for their future safety. Then we have what should have been a fucking short war, but got elongated to the point where it just made MC's character fall lower than any other questionable fanfic MC. I could try and think and see through author's lenses; Showing the life of lower level ninjas or those without genuine Sensei and family support. But at this point it is a freaking Mexican drug cartel story with Danzo being the head honcho and whatnot. There is this Fan Fiction named Wind Calamity: it has covered around 600 chapters now, I think. You see, in that story MC is similarly an orphan without any cheat; most of the early chapters and even now, he has been training with various techniques. But the author there somewhat balanced the boring aspects of the story with light heartedness and action sprinkled here and there. I am not comparing authors or their ability to write stories; I can understand that this story wants to show extreme darkness of the ninja world, while that story doesn't. But if you wanna scale the darkness present in the underbelly of the village, then scale the MC's ability to handle it too. It is just sad at this point~ Not even the good kind of sad... Well, will still complete the story if the Author further updates it, but I won't be waiting for every chapter release anymore...
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🤓

(A/N: If you have any sound jutsu ideas, lmk, I'll be more than happy to try and find a way to integrate them into the story.)

Naruto: Uzushio’s Pride

Naruto: Uzushio’s Pride

Anime & Comics · ABunds899

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Commented
Apparently, I do hate myself...😂

House Buckler's three brass knuckles danced upon a canvas of cerulean, House Cafferen's white fawns pranced amidst lush fields of green, and House Estermont's dark green sea turtle glided upon a gentle sea of grass. As the riders approached, House Fell's banner adorned the sky with a cloak of darkness, where a shimmering crescent moon cast its ethereal glow. House Gower's design, a tapestry of black trefoils upon a cross of ermine, whispered tales of heritage and strength. House Grandison's emblem, a slumbering black lion upon a regal golden stage of serenity. Amid this majesty, House Hasty's purple standard donned a white sash, a mark of honor and distinction. House Herston's red field soared with a vibrant yellow cock of vitality and courage. House Horpe's three moths, their wings adorned with death's heads, fluttered with a foreboding grace. House Kellington's banner, a black bound book, bore the weight of knowledge, a testament to their valued wisdom. House Tarth of Evenfall's stars and moons adorned the celestial blue, a dance mirrored in their noble spirit. House Trant's dark man, hanged in the azure, evoked both mystery and stoicism. House Tudbury's brown tortoise, encased in a yellow lozenge, carried the wisdom of ages upon its aged shell. House Wagstaff's five yellow diamonds shimmered like treasures of the heart, weaving tales of prosperity and ambition. The banner of House Rain, a tempest of blue-green hues. House Swann's sable swans glided upon ebony waters of elegance. House Selmy's three stacks of wheat urged for a bountiful harvest. House Caron's black nightingales sang their haunting melodies, weaving enchantment through the air. And, of course, House Baratheon's black stag, regal in all its strength.

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

TV · ssyffix

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right!??

I failed to hide my disgust at Ser Ryam for the men's incompetency, "As am I…"

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

TV · ssyffix

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😂😂

Sadly enough, he never specified the extent as to how much we should study this elusive past.

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

TV · ssyffix

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Commented
😂😂😂👏🏼👏🏼

Here, a Viserys, weak at the knees, sneezed and then wheezed. (A/N: Forgive me. Finished reading some Doctor Seuss and felt cute <3)

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

TV · ssyffix

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Commented
never knew people knew this word😅

In the end, no words mattered. They saw not the kid, scared shitless. They saw a Farang — another white tourist they could make an example of.

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

TV · ssyffix

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Commented
😂😂😂🥷🥷 nin nin

well let ME tell you TRUCK-kun wearing sky diving gear with parachute opened on his back trying to hit me I tried to Dodge him But alas it was all for naught as people say ' It's impossible to save yourself from the greatest assassin ever known' .

Spirit of Vengeance in One Piece

Spirit of Vengeance in One Piece

Anime & Comics · FastSquirrel622

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Commented
daughter.... concubine...???

"This is a farce. The peace treaty offered to Iwa by the Sandaime Hokage is a farce. We cannot accept this, my lord," argued one of his advisors, another lickspittle that had risen up the ranks using the influence of his daughter, who was one of his concubines.

Reborn in a daimyo's court-Naruto SI

Reborn in a daimyo's court-Naruto SI

Anime & Comics · Drkest

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other than the obvious sentence mistakes... it's an interesting idea 🙂

I'm also might've skipped the whole process of choosing ability and just gave MC the Time control but I wanted to make it more entertaining. Well, what would you choose in that situation? Please let me know in the comments.

Naruto: Time Traveler

Naruto: Time Traveler

Anime & Comics · Sycore_w

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Doctor_Blue
Commented
Ohoho~ noice!

'Hello, Moto!' sounded the ringtone of my recently purchased Motorola RAZR. You bet your sweet cheeks I bought the hot pink one, too.

I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)

I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)

Movies · BarCalak

Doctor_Blue
Commented
slow and detailed 😃

Hey guys this is a new fanfic and will have regular updates. This is the first chapter and I wanted to know if you guys want it this slow and detailed or if you want it to have a little more pace with the story.

Water Bending In Marvel

Water Bending In Marvel

Movies · lazarus898

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