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man entire chapter for single character, she must be pretty important then huh, gotta keep an eye

hats off author it was really funny

It was excellent, it was really giving me overlord feel. Just sometime keep pov to 1st person to understand characters thoughts and their reasons. And keep chapters long.

this changes whole Arc. I look forward to it.

Draw sword guild is already delusional thinking they have already weakened Korea as a whole due to their pride in the guild for having the greatest no. of S rank hunters and their belief in their leader (goto), so they will be haughty and will look down on other hunters. Our mc is also mixed so they will either look out for mc to have him on their side or will do exactly the opposite if doesn't listen to them. As mc is a new hunter, it's given everyone will look down on him except a few and will try their luck there to make them feel good or to establish an illusionary hierarchy So if you think about it this scene has great potential. I think you're not sticking to original so I think it will be great to start your own from here bit by bit.

too short I guess

it's nice to know about side characters👍

next time dao of face slapping, be ready boys🤣

no that's plot twist between happy go lucky moments