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"Want some hot buns? I still have a few of my honeyed special buns, want a try?" The owner of the storefront he stopped at excitedly called him and Itachi agreed to have some and paid with a copper coin before moving along.

Crows x Souls

Anime & Comics · QuackVader

9mth

Posted

To the point that I have read so far it has been an entertaining read. I may be slightly biased because I love reading books with a real life war segment like a ww2 arc and this story did well in that regard. It's also refreshing to see a story where after 15 chapters the MC is not the secret king of the world, spoon-feeding the cast characters (like captain America) the solutions to every problem. Obviously the story has some negatives like all stories do, but I believe it will be smoothed out in further chapters and I look forward to the future of the story! Also a major plus to me that Peggy Carter stays with Captain America as it feels weird otherwise :p

Marvel: The Journey

Movies · AidenUsmani

nacnuD

1yr

Replied to iTride

instead of adding the lukewarm water you could add marinara sauce

The Last Rising Sun (Assassin)

Anime & Comics · NotPolarArtic

nacnuD

1yr

Posted

The story just felt like a recap of the story of whatever world the MC was in at that particular moment and lacked any character structure, originality, and world building/back story.

An Endless New Dream

Anime & Comics · Commonnerfer

nacnuD

1yr

Replied to Ikar0z

Or the whole paragraph could be reduced to "he awoke under a tree as he recalled his last moments on his private jet"

As he recalls the last thing he recalled, Greg had awoken behind a tree. After his private jet crashed in his former planet, he died and spent some time in a dark abyss until waking up here under this tree.

Building an Empire in Game of Thrones

War · Dr_Dred

nacnuD

1yr

Replied to Festapup98

The epic of leviathan

ch 43 Chapter 42 - Internship Begins

Superman in the Multiverse (MHA, DC, and Marvel)

Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon

nacnuD

1yr

Commented

Author deadass just looked up how many females are in "_______" series and makes that the harem lol

ch 0 -1 Harem/Wives

Ascending to Supremacy

Anime & Comics · Sinning_Sovereign

nacnuD

1yr

Commented

Cross swept his leg out, hitting Gogros in the chin and sending him flying into the surrounding pillars as he spat out some blood, hopping to his feet and saying "Oi... Ugly ass whatever you are, I'll rip out each of you eyes if you look at my wife again, do you believe it?"

The Last Blood Elf (Completed)

Movies · Monkey_Godking

nacnuD

1yr

Posted

Loved the premise of the story and was very exited to read as the Greek mythology lore is some of my favorite. I don't even mind that the basis of the novel is a massive harem, but what did bother me was the inter character dialog and how easy it was for him to pick up the women. There is little to no romance involved in the story and most inter harem disputes go like this: "I don't like ...." "but you are beatiful" "ok, I forgive you and you are always right" It is very one dimensional and gives the characters a plastic, synthetic feeling. Another blaring issue is the writing quality as the grammar and spelling leaves much to be desired. All in all, I would recommend giving it a try and if these issues don't bother you at all then all power to you.

DC: REBORN AS ZEUS (OMNIVERSE)

Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs

nacnuD

1yr

Posted

Definitely one of my top novels as it has not only kept me intrigued with the plot line and characters but also the comedy that had me wheezing during the Rwby arc. 10/10 would men in black myself to read again. Only criticism is that for approx 250 chapters it never addresses the elephant in the room, being that the MC never does come into contact with his father

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

nacnuD

1yr

Posted

I would definitely recommend this fan fic to most people as the author creates an easy to understand world background (I have never watched fate except stay night and could easily understand the kingdom aspect) and the characters have proper personalities and not just your average everyone is in love with MC cliché. Sorry if this was confusing not great at reviewing :p

IHAPR V.0

Video Games · God_Of_Brutality

nacnuD

1yr

Posted

the plot of the story and the concept of a mixture between the marvel and DC universe is a fantastic Idea but the execution is sadly underwhelming. The poor grammar makes the reading almost unbearable, which could be fixed with an editor, but so far an editor hasnt been implemented. My only other problem is the character interaction between batman and Richard as it is kind of annoying and could be resolved easily by Richard in a variety of means.

THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )

Anime & Comics · Xuefang1

nacnuD

1yr

Commented

+respect for character choice

Hi My name is Grayfia lucifuge desu..Yes That sexy silver hair sexy maid of Sirzetch Lucifer and soon to be his wife of course..Oh I am not his wife yet .And I don't want to become one..So..I will do my best to become stronger..Now I am 10 years old.. Qualified mid ranked pure blooded devil.I said in my head [Status]

A Wild Queen Of Hell

Anime & Comics · Sirixilo

nacnuD

1yr

Commented

what is this konosuba, was that kazuma?

She knew that Dinklage had taken some weapons from the battlefield and even cleared out some of the caches that were at the base. She understood this, the right of the winner and trophies are sacred. But she could not understand why he needed her underwear ...