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The story is good, the MC hasn't done anything annoying yet, I like the fact that his mind is not focused on women, the guy has money and spends money, l The story doesn't really have a serious purpose, it's not great but it's readable, the guy behaves well. I hope he decides to travel around the world for a while. I really hope it doesn't become a stupid harem.

The idea is good but the mc ruins everything, for a being of his power, he acts like a fangirl, talks a lot. the guy is afraid of Batman like WTF, he lost all these means. He is like a child who wants to show himself competent in front of an adult but does not want to be questioned.

From the start I was disappointed, he's supposed to be smart right? In short, he doesn't form any strategy for the future and does things without meaning, without a useful plan, the number of cities he wants to take control of is a lot and that shows how stupid he is. He doesn't have any stable strategy to develop his little kingdom without interference, he is quite arrogant and stupid once again I'll stop this story in chapter 14 like seriously, "we shouldn't give women too much freedom because they will be abused, I wonder what excuse he has for the Ra*pist and pedos 🙄 The guy is number 1, his body is legit stronger than all these soldiers but he had to be beaten by this girl in our team whose name I forgot, he should have beaten her, even if the girl was stronger, he should have made a plan before.The characters are 2D, no personality, Loras knows everything is GAY wanted the girl like WTF bro? Instead of trying to build his kingdom because with the system he doesn't need to get involved in Westeros, De Daenerys, de Ned Stark, de Jon Snow, it's not her fucking problem Let Dany grow up and see if when she becomes the mother of dragons, she will try to attack your kingdom and therefore test defenses , make your kingdom a myth, make it as beautiful as the Elf cities in LOTR ,But hey I guess I was expecting too much from a story with #HAREM🙄

I stopped at chapter 27, I couldn't take it anymore, this Lolie is so annoying that I took every second for her to die. She's selfish, spoiled, just thinks she can just sulk to get everything she wants, I hate her, I tried to skip the part where she appears but eventually stopped. The MC should have fired her and blacklisted her. Good story but his presence ruins everything

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Woah I stopped at chapter 8, canonically Jiraiya's team didn't graduate that early, and they are known to have participated in the war. You just reduced their achievements to highlight the MC. Everything is much faster, there are so many plot holes, we are recommended to take the exams early like Kakashi and Itachi. Otherwise people like Sak. The guy doesn't know any ninja techniques and only uses those in his system, This story is rushed that we don't talk about almost any ninja techniques, they don't seal these things in paper, He doesn't even say a word about the seals , which should have helped him as an excuse with these inventions , He does not think about the danger that Konoha is by showing all the techniques of the system , the techniques themselves are weaker than the canon techniques, which he does not know, Without the plot armor he will be like Naruto at the beginning and definitely would not have succeeded in the Academy

I saw the comments and was delighted thinking that I found a rarity , well no, it's already starting badly, the guy is completely white, no mistake , he is all prepared, he arrives in the world of HP with a background that even Ron Weasley will see that it is fake, it's like if everyone's IQ drops so that everything they say or does is the work of almighty, the universe rushes to prove them right , GOT, real shit. He appears at the right time without context and takes Aerys's head, lectures Robert, insults Tywin and no one tells him they don't care that a stranger without reputation tell them he is disappointed in them like WTF bro, for a demigod I would have thought that creating a convincing background would have been one of these powers , for a son of God, the sons of the gods are 1000 times more powerful than him, dude Percy Jackson could kill him with one slap , In Naruto... In short, he teaches a lesson, kills. He does not settle into the world to help them move forward. Boost them . For a scientist I would have thought he would spend at least 10 years in a world, being born, thriving, distributing this medical research into the multiverse, having businesses, moving the world forward , but no, the guy is an executioner...who judges you. He sees the world only in black and white

The story is superb, it shows that the author did research but at the same time, we see that the MC really doesn't think about certain things that he should given that he comes from a modern era , Visenya Targaryen is a remnant of Valerya,v The fact that in a kingdom all the powerful fight on the same wavelength i.e. dragons, sex was less of a problem, since you can't slap and belittle your wife since she could let you eat by her dragon , Visenya knew how to wield a sword, so she was a warrior, a dragon raider. She greatly helped conquer Westeros and rule the 7 Kingdoms after the death of Aegon, so it was accomplished , The MC's sister is a little Sansa, without will of her own and quite timid, being afraid of leading an outpost while the body inhabited by the MC was solitary and spent its time far from the swords and to read. So she ran the house, why make her a submissive little coward , it's annoying that the MC has to explain every little thing to her and tell her everything she needs to do and can't even wield a sword . Anyway, it ruined the story a bit for me. But otherwise the story is good

I couldn't continue, I was discouraged from the first chapter, this conversation with the god absolutely ruined everything , it was squeaky , the god talks too much, MC corrects the god saying he's just a ROB, I imagine the MC telling Zeus that he is not God and seeing him reincarnated as an earthworm or his soul experiencing eternal punishment , in short these first chapters prevent the continuity of the story

The story is pretty good!The character was OP and there were some plot holes but I really liked it . The last episode was too rushed, having a sherigan ruined everything, heurzus it was at the end., Thanks to the author.

It started off pretty badly, for someone who advocates his ultimate intelligence, these actions don't show it, he never recorded his weirdness, with his so-called ideetic memory, he never thought about the fact that " hey, they might suspect me of working with antagonism!” No, that's beyond his intelligence. This disgusting shit with the mother of the body he uses, proves that the author is an orphan and if he isn't, it's even worse. This shows a lack of respect for this woman and changes the reality around him to make it what he wants and call it hot. The harem is not mentioned in the tag, the only good thing is that the author manages to make it all readable