Webnovel Author: Fgs_Chrome - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Fgs_Chrome

1mth

Commented

The difference between stealth and concealed presence is basically with stealth you can still be seen or hear/smell them while concealed presence takes that away if I'm correct.

Skills- Sharingan lvl 3, swordsmanship (A), Archery (A), Medicine (B), Trap Making (A), Stealth (A), Concealed Presence (S)

Fgs_Chrome

3mth

Commented

ophis from dxd lol

( A loli dressed in black!)

Reincarnated into Naruto with breathing techniques.

Anime & Comics · patinhoDEUSVULT

Fgs_Chrome

7mth

Replied to Master_Celestial

right I was like. How. When. i dont remember reading about him having one lol.

Beads of my sweat dripped to the ground. The stone flooring made of bricks became my bed as I forced myself to stand up. I could feel the tail on my back limp, as if mirroring my current feelings.

Fgs_Chrome

9mth

Replied to Davidmcnasty

he is maxing them out or close to as maxing them out. I just don't want to keep writing his status every five minutes.

ch 19 Chapter 19

Fgs_Chrome

9mth

Replied to Rock_Drake

yes it's an AU. Should of mention that my bad. I didn't think of having bell in this story it just sort of happened. I wrote what's on my mind at the time so yea.

ch 13 Chapter 13

Fgs_Chrome

9mth

Replied to Rock_Drake

what can I say lol I'm in a good mood today.

Chapter 7

Fgs_Chrome

9mth

Replied to Rock_Drake

Your Welcome even I know it's overdone

ch 0 5 Chapter 5

Fgs_Chrome

9mth

Replied to Rock_Drake

Thank you.

ch 0 4 Chapter 4

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Commented

interesting. very interesting.

ch 0 -2 Power System

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Commented

BANG! BANG! BANG! SHOTS FIRED!!!!

Thirdly, I hope you are not hypocrites raising issues of morality when many of you have read worse.

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Commented

F

And at last, for the very first time. No one laughed when they heard his name. (A/N: Press F in the chat.)

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Replied to Atlas_123

true but remember she gets stronger when she's mad and also gets stronger the more she kills. this is most likely her default strength. Not her true strength.

Strength: 39

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Commented

I've already read way past this chapter but I just gotta say one thing. BEST MOM EVER.

Just so he can start another in a new world.

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Posted

Honestly, To much freaking details and explanations. like seriously. I'm glad you know your stuff and all but making entire chapters basically info dump kills the story fast. it's fine to give a brief explanation but don't use the entire freaking chapter. The story had an interesting concept and was looking forward to reading it but not so much anymore. only like 5 chaps at most and I'm already dropping it because I hate info dumps. If you don't mind that kind of thing then this might be a good story for you. Heck I don't even mind slow building stories as long as it's entertaining and doesn't have mile long explanations. That's why I'm giving a lot a 3 because I neither like nor hate this story other than the fact I'm dropping it. My suggestion to you author is to not put to much information and explanations in the chapters. If we are curious about something, then we can look it up to find out ourselves. Not hating on ya but just giving some advice. I'm a writer to though I don't post stories online because I don't want to have to get a schedule to upload chaps. Anyways, good luck and enjoy.

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Commented

interesting way to start a story with a synopsis as well. well done my friend.

And so, the protagonist began his new life/story…

Erogelic Physique Immortal Cultivator

Anime & Comics · FapEmperor

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Commented

sounds kinda like nerigante armour from monster hunter world

The armor looked similar to Kyren's draconic-humanoid form in a few ways. Metallic black scales and metal covered it while differing sized purple spikes were placed all over its body. Some were in strategic positions like the knee, shoulders, back, and other areas that could be utilized in combat. On top of the head were two horns that shot out front but curved backward. Faint purple veins with a slight glow traveled on any less thick areas, looking comparable in intensity to Dragon's Anger. A large spherical crystal was embedded into the chest that slightly glowed with magic power. There was nothing like eyes or a mouth on the face, just blank and smooth metal, so it seemed impossible to see out of.

Dragon Incarnation

Games · TitanicApex711

Fgs_Chrome

1yr

Commented

sounds like SAO the one that starts with A. Don't know how to spell it.

Although most of the virtual worlds failed, the ones that worked started producing advanced technologies and ideas at frightening speeds. Monolith hired armies to protect their research, and an independent marketing company to sell their technologies to the major powers of the world. The once small group of geniuses changed their name to the 'Monolith Foundation' and became a large powerhouse in no time at all.