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2022-01-11 Joined Japan

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They abused his maid so much, she gained a lot of points in stamina.
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The pot-bellied servant could hear his heart exploding. The count wasn't a stingy man. Although he clearly disliked Roy too much, he didn't cut off his allowances to save a few pennies. But then, where did it go? It went into the mouth of this father and son duo. One was the kitchen master and the other the plates cleaner. The crime they committed was grievous in nature. They weren't only stealing from Roy. They were also stealing from the Count. Yan was the son of Mart, the Kitchen Master. They had been stealing the money the count had sent Roy's way for the last decade. They had done more daring things. They ate the food meant for him and his maid, and they abused his maid, forcing her to do their job, clean plates, and prepare meals for hundreds of people. It was not wrong to say that they, too, had a hand behind the abuse Amelia and Roy had suffered so far. Roy found all that out after he inspected "Yan."

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

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Riddles I'm too lazy to understand. Something about jealousy and the fear of the MC's talents?

"If that hadn't happened and everything was simple... How good it would've been. The county would've gained an archmage. Alas, his betrayal and his fear have pushed the child born under the conqueror's star far, far away from his glorious fate..."

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

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Don't sacrifice the seriousness of your novel for useless comedy. Some readers might treat your novel as a joke or a gag rather than something to admire like a masterpiece.

[You intentionally made it seem like you tripped on your foot and fell down to the ground like a sore loser to your maid and the servants in the garden to hide from them the fact that you murdered a huge family of ants in cold blood by crushing them with your body weight so that they wouldn't think or spread rumors of you becoming a crazy young man who likes Killing ants and bees.]

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

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The Son of Heaven would be the scapegoat. If the MC takes the opportunities of the son of heaven, he'll probably replace him and make his not-so-peaceful life even more chaotic. Remember that the Sons of Heaven are trouble magnets.

Taking too many treasures of the Son of Heaven and his comrades might lead to their death, which in turn would bring a change in the future of the world as he knew it and make all his knowledge about the future events useless.

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

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Ay barbie.

"Oni... Do you think you're allowed to leave this place?" The old spirit asked as he placed the fan in front of his mouth.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

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The comment section suddenly went Brazilian for some unknown reason.

"Hey, if that happens I won't stop it, but I won't let you kill yourself. After all, you're my friend, I think I should make a plan in case this happens in the future, maybe save money and buy a passport abroad? Maybe Brazil? I heard the politicians there are very corrupt, and in exchange for a few dollars, they would help you easily." He began to monologue out loud.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

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Violet and the maids: MC... do nut us.

Currently, I am at the university. Before going to the university, I passed my job and resigned from McDonutus; I plan to earn money in a more practical way... I will rob thieves.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

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Please don't let it be what I think it is...
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This room was surrounded by vampires, hmm, I did a brief count and there were twenty vampires? And they were all over the mansion; it looks like this place is bigger than I thought. I look down and see some red silhouettes in the basement too. I also see that the only human in this mansion is Natalia, and she was actually in the basement sitting with two more vampires, and she seems to be eating something?

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

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A masterpiece. This is a pretty unique story. He doesn't become overpowered where he can literally one shot everything. Instead, the author builds the MC a solid foundation why his ability is this and that. I especially felt my blood boil when he went to the Asura race's world and clapped their cheeks. Additionally, I felt like I was having a heart attack (from excitement, hype, and pride) when those seemingly almighty existences discussed how they couldn't do what the MC did if they were in his position (I promise you that it is very blood boiling). But my most appreciated arc is when he went to Eventide World. It was a good break from the China Unification Arc. Some reta- I mean... brain dead people called it the filler arc because of how much 'filler' the author put in it. It really isn't a filler arc tho. Some people may call 'world building' and 'character building' a 'filler' because of limited brain cells, but to those who pay attention to the story and read properly instead of just skimming through it and call it filler will easily notice how smart the author is. Remember when he evolved the Second Order Lightning Movement to Third Order Crimson Lightning Flash? (Ch 804) The author did not (yet) show its records. I'm guessing that the new option is like a waypoint or an anchor. For example: [Lightning Waypoint: The user can mark a location or an object to teleport to no matter where they are by consuming 100 mana.] or [Lightning Space-Time Gate: Opens a gate on a location where the User has been to before. Consumes 100 mana. Can only be used when out of combat. 10 days cooldown.] So that when he leaves the Eventide world, the hundreds of chapters the author put in it won't actually go to waste. Or maybe I'm just over thinking it. If I'm wrong, pretend that this review never existed. Thanks for the 10000000000/10 novel author. And update more chapter everyday (if you can do it) but don't push yourself or rush the story.
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Did the fiance get c*cked in advance?

"What's wrong with that? He's not my husband yet, so I can do whatever I want, no?" Lyneth replied with her eyebrow raised. "So? After knowing who I am, are you going to accept my offer? I can give you access to the gym if you want to," she continued as she leaned her head forward and tried to kiss him.

Destroying My Own Novel

Destroying My Own Novel

Fantasy · Iqfauli

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"After years of agony, you have departed from a miserable life. Since you have been a dedicated player of Afterlife Dream before death, you are now given a chance to gain life points within this game that can be used as leverage for your next life on earth."

Afterlife Dream

Afterlife Dream

Video Games · Lu_Shui

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Easy to hijack.
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"Daniel Weston, welcome to Afterlife Dream. Please enter your full name with an underscore for username and your birth date for password."

Afterlife Dream

Afterlife Dream

Video Games · Lu_Shui

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