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"Well, this is my stop." Al said as he looked up and noticed them approaching where his bodyguards and river would fetch him. "Here."

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he held out*

"Give me your phone." Al said as he heald out his hand.

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being led*

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grateful

Elena said nothing and just followed the maid while cleaning her tears at least now she was more than greatful that she wasn't going to spend a night with that monster.

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fifties," he pointed out. "Plus Please watch your punctuation.

"It says here the Mafia Lord is a man in his early twenties. He is cold to all those around him and is averse to the female touch." Al laughed as he looked at his father. "You're in your fifties! He pointed out, plus you never let go of mom."

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I finished this chapter several days ago, paid to read the next few. Only to be sent back to 920! Now I am not allowed any further chapters without paying. Is it the author or the app cheating me? As much as I have enjoyed Never Judge and the sequels, I am ready to delete everything.

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where AN old tree* An is an article. And is a conjunction

As soon as they reached the football field, Cedric told his driver to stop and got out. He walked to the far end of the field where and old tree and some benches were.

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her was holding? Proof for pronouns. PLEASE

Ian looked down at the man her was holding as he looked in disbelief.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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After being corrected several times, you still confuse "whipped" and "wiped".

"Has Miguel given an update?" She asked as she lifted her head from Francesca's arms and whipped the tears from her eyes.

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let herself do what?

Katerina said nothing as she continued to sob and let herself reales all her worry and distress. She was among friends, she was safe.

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I am aware that Tagalog has no gender specific pronouns. English does. Please be more careful of what pronouns you use for characters

"Just tell her what happened. She left ahead of me on my plane, she should be arriving soon." Cedric told Natalia as she tried to calm her down. "How bad is it?"

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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did you mean "erupts"?

"When news errups of what Cedric and his friends are doing, we will collect what they have left." Ian said, much to everyone's cheers.

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quite AN exciting* and is a conjunction. an is the article

"Wake me when it's time for dinner, I think tonight will be quite and exciting one and for the first time since we trapped ourselves here, we will be happy." Ian said as he made his way to the bedroom that was now practically bare.

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Aldrich Laurence *

"Aldrich, Aldrich aurence, little prince of the underworld that's going to be a headache to everyone." Cedric chuckled as he thought of the little boy.

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out of all*

In all honesty, ouf all of them, she was the person he was most disappointed to see.

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he sat across FROM*

"So you are the real leaders of the Rajas, I should have guessed." Ian grinned as he waved one of his people to serve his guests food and drink as he sat across six people.