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I hate to say it but the main character is a simp. Instead of making her fall in love with him, why does he act like the inferior and goes to mess with that other man. I think she doesn’t like him because he is too nice to her that caused her to Friendzone him. Like the saying goes in order to capture one must let loose. He should never show that he likes her or she will feel less interested. Simping=Death

I dropped this not because it is bad. Just because it was feminist. It might not be great for me but might be very juicy for other. Thank author sama bye

Sorry if it sounded offensive, what I meant is that everyone has their own personality and this one just doesn’t fit mine. There maybe other ppls out there who may like it tho. I like the concept of your novel but the personality of the character are not to my liking. Again sorry if it sounded offensive to you

Author can you plshh add one more no two more girls that is enough. Harems became bad when there are too many

(Dropped)The novel started out great but thing that messed it up for me is the fact that after his heartbreak with his first love, he took the initiative to be a simp and explain to her like a little doggy. I mean I’m pretty sure she knew he liked her, I mean she is his close buddy. In my opinion she is the one who should have come to console him and explain not the other way around. Instead when he came to explain she also thought such a little thing doesn’t have effect on him. I’m very disappointed by how things went(no matter how great his mentality is in his past life this doesn’t make it right). Just because he was great and have mentality doesn’t get her to treat him like that and is not an excuse for him to become a simp, it is even a time when you evaluate your friendship( since she didn’t come to his house to explain I believe she is not even qualified to be his friend). I just can’t imagine a guy who basically got heartbreak take the initiative to contact the one who broke it. It’s basically a masochist behavior and I can’t stand that. From that point on I just couldn’t keep reading it( from what I see, if the author aware of his mistakes it’s actually good, but if not hmmm..... it is said the book is a reflection of the author)no offense !

It was ok at first but after chapter 31 things starting to go downhill for me. Especially Ame is just a soil that ruins a good milk. my advise to the author for future novel. Almost nobody, especially male who are the target audience do not like reverse masochist. Most audience who read this tend to be masculine males. Before you write a novel you have to decide what you deliver and who to write to. Like for masochist or masculine males(normal men) or others ...

Right, it is so sad that most authors go with the existing little sister routine and they don’t try to create a new type of personality that is based on reality so saaddd am not even gonna bother reading if I see little sister blush it cause I know what’s up xd. Also only a little sister why not a brother or both. I will stop here cause if I start listing out problem with current authors writings a day isn’t enough 😭

I just don’t understand how a dynasty can be so incompetent that they can’t even guard against enemies. It almost seem like they are like that useless female heroine that follows the MC around. Also please explain how someone weaker than MC can give him such a fatal injury. It had to be known the higher the realm the harder to try to kill or injure you. And as I presume that the sage realm is OP. It makes no sense that the Mc can get injured by one strike. All I’m saying is that try to make it believable, add more realistic elements and give as a solid MC betrayal story. This is what every Cultivation novel is missing. Trash this trash that like every human has time to focus on one person and calls him trash. Cultivation novel are slowly becoming boring because of this nonsense. Realistic world element are sorely lacking. Like actual human emotions and logical reasoning.

He meant you the character’s appearance and figures. You don’t explain what they look like like their hair, body size, facial features etc...