TheOne_Tak3mi

7mth

Replied to InGlorious

meh.. still feels like he went for nothing. I feel like this part would've been better in a different pov, like Dumbledores or someone.

ch 120 The-Champions-Chosen (II)

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

TheOne_Tak3mi

7mth

Commented

huh, you know I'd forgotten that this was even a crossover🤣. I thought the author was smoking something by suddenly introducing marvel.

/They called themselves Hydra and I don't want to talk about them/ Himera gestured furiously. She didn't want to talk about those monsters.

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

TheOne_Tak3mi

7mth

Commented

gotta be honest, I have no idea where you want to take this fic with this time travel bulls**t. but I'm wary because time travel has ruined a lot of fanfics.

ch 111 A-Wrong-Turn (II)

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

[Since it's a young multiverse an your goals are inevitably going to guide you to pursuing immortality and dimensional travel, yes I can discern that without you telling me. I am willing to offer what you know as a system]

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

TheOne_Tak3mi

7mth

Replied to GardenDevil

"I am glad I get to die as any man should, old and surrounded by his kids. Remember to always look after each other and never truly fight amongst yourselves"

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

TheOne_Tak3mi

7mth

Replied to Ilovenovel

he's probably gonna win like that isn't he...

It doesn't take me long to make it there, and I stop just before a complicated circle of ash and chalk, drawn across the grass just on the outskirts of the town. I wait patiently, my eyes wide open for the exact moment the array activates.

In DxD with the Eyes of God

Anime & Comics · Ventus889

TheOne_Tak3mi

7mth

Replied to Taro

yeah, I agree. Pretty soon, he'll be acting like those dense anime protagonists and the excuse will be "hE wAs aN oRpHan" he isn't experienced with love...it's just dumb man🙄

In my confusion, I completely forget to use my eyes to find out what's going on.)

In DxD with the Eyes of God

Anime & Comics · Ventus889

TheOne_Tak3mi

7mth

Commented

Loki's eyes widened in recognition. "Demeter Familia? You're with her? That would explain why I'm here."

Is it wrong to live steadily!

Anime & Comics · Iseeyou6969

TheOne_Tak3mi

8mth

Commented

hmm, author forgot that he said this guy watched the movie I see😑

"Ah shit. What the hell is going on in this universe, how did so many Spider-Men appear?" Mark sat slumped on the couch with a lifeless look on his face.

Spider-Verse: Another Spider-Man

Anime & Comics · Baph0met

TheOne_Tak3mi

8mth

Replied to TheOne_Tak3mi

I'm still at the beginning chapters.it's well written, but I did notice one crucial thing that's missing at the beginning. and that's emotion, we really don't see much of what Percy is feeling. for example, being scared when he wakes up alone in a cell, his first kill, etc. I know it's mentioned that he's being strong so that he can meet his mother again, but at least show something.it does get better as the chapters go by, so it's not gonna be an issue for long if the improvement continues.

Percy Jackson: the dark souls survivor

Video Games · Scathach_

TheOne_Tak3mi

8mth

Commented

just say eyes man😑, hues even though it might sound "cool" to you. Is wrong in this context.

He didn't even have the time to look around, the only thing his hues could take in was a large sign that said "C.C's Spa and Resort. Then the scene shifted.

FrostBitten (Percy Jackson Fanfic)

Book&Literature · CarlosDr3vna

TheOne_Tak3mi

8mth

Posted

40 chapters but only 5 reviews... I'll read it, but you gotta admit that's pretty sus...

Percy Jackson: the dark souls survivor

Video Games · Scathach_

TheOne_Tak3mi

8mth

Commented

According to the Prophet, the story went something like this… A young man, not even out of Hogwarts' age range yet, with seemingly no background stormed into Gringotts. To a crowd of witnesses, Wizard and Goblin alike, he declared himself heir to Merlin and the Founders.

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

Book&Literature · Daddy

TheOne_Tak3mi

9mth

Commented

and to think he could've used this "suggestion" to convince his parents to move😑😑. welp that's plot I guess, we wouldn't be reading this if he just moved😂.

After using "Suggestion" to locate the hotel where Matou Kariya was staying under police surveillance, he also obtained the internal structure of the Matou family by using the Demi-Servant's Caster class "Suggestion" on them before they left, creating a map of the family's structure.

Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice

Anime & Comics · DaoistOneTouch

TheOne_Tak3mi

9mth

Replied to Pushkar_Malik

it's a Chinese translation, I wouldn't be surprised if he's face slapping and coughing blood in future chapters tbh😑😑

Surprise, shock, puzzlement, confusion... in an instant, many complex expressions passed through Gilgamesh's blood-red eyes, and finally, a very interested smile appeared on his face.