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i dont see what people see in this i only read 6 chapters. but it was frustrating its jumps from scene to scene , nothing make sense , there is no info author just says some speices name and thats it there are huge time skips but it forsnt make you feel the time passage. its like i was ten then i became 16 i became a sorcerer that while . there are wizards there are some empire called imperion there are different sentient species ?? its like some autstic wrote this and everyone gives 5 but in chapters there are no comments or max 5 and this shit is ranked . is author deleting reviews

its pretty bad. mc is supposed to be battle veteran, cold ruthless person. his friends and lovers tortured in front of him by his sibling and mother . but in the story after mc gets a rescue mission to save people everyone's thought of him is he is hard in the shell but soft inside which isnt true . and from 100 chapter i read 30 cahpter is pure bullshit from other people cuz they think mc is soft in the inside and mc takes people with him even tho he doesnt want to do that . he is fucking braindead he says he couldnt kill them if all they want is to follow him and do not harm him . i was like bruh just knock them out then go on your way . mc has 3 female companion no romantic interest but they are fucking anyoningg like too much they dont listen to mc . even tho mc said he would kill them if they did a mistake . they did mc didnt kill them cuz he is in a good mode its such a frustrating read i wanna bash my head to wall author if you think about re writing make mc's subordinates less annyoing and make mc more smart

well mc is idiot but not any idiot he is the dumbest person alive . first of all he admits he is regressor to a elite ranker who is much more powerfull than mc now this isnt that bad but this elite ranker gets blessing from mc's enemies when he was in tower and mc is like wait this doesnt make sense elite rankers are too weak to get valued for blessing and those who gives blessing to elite ranker have the domain of fate and this elite ranker deeply respect mc's enemies. with all this information instead of lying he admits he is an regressor and talk shit about person or clan where elite hunter from ,does this shit make sensesecondly elite hunter trains him to fall on his arm from certain height to gain constituan stat but mc was like that will create unbalance so i should just fall flat i was like yeah make sense if its better and doable why not do better after regressing but of course after one month of this ,mc tries this from a mountain and nearly dies on the verge of death he merges his very op offence skill with a recovery skill which both skill has compabilty of  so he gets a shitty recovery skill mc is too dumb and doesnt know his limits third of all he tooks his family everywhere and behave like an absolute idiot .in their own village his family gets kidnapped for 30 copper and mc hurting one men but instead of learning from this and not making enemy .what mc does is going to big city with his family and visiting places with his sister then his sister getting pushed by little child he goes what he fuck are you doing then little child's sister comes and ask what is going on ,mc says he pushed my sister , little child denies him pushing mc's sister then little child's sister says her name and ask mc do you know me now you expect mc to behave correctly cuz obsivously other side has family power and important person after behaving then he can go and kill them at night but noo mc says i dont care and cuts little childs finger at a public place like dude you are putting your family at risk didnt recent kidnapping wasnt enoughshortly mc is like a cultivator genius he has comprensive abilities maxium about mana but oblivous to anything else dumb bastard idk how this novel gets 5 stars with such a idiot mc

naaah bro novel is shit but they did explain the skill tree .everyone has them but they are limited to their profession and cannot be upgraded by exp they need to work hard to master it while our mc has access to all skils he learned from his past life when he was divine level expert so all those ass pulls skills are from mc's past life and his SSS Talent .every other person has to find skill books and had to train hard to level those skill up and idk power level is shitty mc has a talent that isnt seen in thosuands of years and experience of a divine level expert and bunch of bulshittery of course he is gonna hit way above his level . and there are others like him example being xiao yuzi but racisim and rape make this novel shit

dude saying " its for the plot in the future " is one of the worst reason there can be .there is a fucking name for it called forced plot and its a result of shitty writing if the character is selfish then make him selfish and make the plot based on charachters .

ehh its pretty bland . mc is powered by plot armor and dialagous are bad .mc goes from having a B rank diffuculty quest to S rank SS and SSS in about fucking two hours .and npc are really like npc he meets the king in 5 hours of game ,king is level 210 mc is 11 then king gives too much information about game and even gifts him a godslayer heart a fucking godslayer heart . you may not understand what godslayer heart is but 25 of those heart gives you power of god which can beat all mortals so kings gives such a treasure to a fucking newbie and then queen which is level 205 promise mc to take him to empire when he becames level 20 .its just feel artifical and yes i know its a game but even in gamrs there should be some fucking sense and this game was supposed to be ultra realistic vr game the " second life "

its feels artificial and forced mc has zero emotions and calmly deduce things like zombies ,another world, a titan that can crash ships but has emotions for his cheating gf . like its irks me when mc's piece of shit gf survives and leeches of mc and its slow i read 10 chap there is practiqlly nothing in the story give it a go if you likr bein frustrated

i dont understand how can dark side influence him before he bought force sensitivity . the reason why all people calling him dumb is he wastes his point and he knows its a waste but he still does it . he doesnt know how important 1000 point is .he basically has no knowledge but he still does it . why cant he first learn importance of point .he can look for shop then maybe he could find some medicine or health potion it maybe cheaper because well what system or god did was instant healing but they have 10 days and women would probably off herself saving him points . i know it can be much to think so much when he is emotinally fucked up but you tryna make him look smart and after what he was gone through sacrifescing 1/4 of his points for strangers and killers isnt really make sense so yeah he is dumb . other thing what makes him dumb is in the first chapters saying how can they kill a teen . its just doesnt make sense he understands teen is powerful he is wary of him and fucking see him blow people like meatbags after all this when others saying he would have killed us if not for point loss . he is shocked by this information its just makes him looks dumb again you said he is smart at least in his stats so him not really understanding shit about world and being 26 year old navie person is really dumb

no he just doesnt wanna see fanfics full of ploholes and lack of logic just cuz it is ff doesnt mean you could write anything it has to make sense in the context and there are bad ff and good ones where you dont find plotholds clear as day or logic problems

its fun and thats it . if you read strawberry naruto ff its same style but this one seems too bad if you read the other novel but it is still fun to read

i didnt read the novel but what do you mean air is shattering like glass and he is controling the glass . isnt it pretty much he control how shattering moves if shattering creates glass like view it doesnt change they are air just shattered