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Story's very nice but where is the mentality of the MC at, he got gamers mind which should have removed his naive ness also you made him kill like a million people in the illusion so i think he should be more desensitized to killing. But overall the story's fantastic and one of the better ATG fanfics I've read

i dont understand the refrences in this chapter and can you please aske someone to proofread your chapters