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it's a good story but there are places where i am not able to know what is happening.the world background is also good.i gave world background 4star,updating stability 3,character design 4,and writing style 3 cause I feel there are many corrections need.world background can also get more exciting if author dig under it.overall well made novel.dont forget to keep updating.

Introduction of the characters are well made and themselves also.Story developing is also good.The typical romance story of University but with a little bit changes of own is good.But i recommend the Author to describe the appearance of characters.It's not a big threat but I think Author should use more words in all indivisual chapters. But it's a minor threat or even it isn't a threat so everyone have their own style.Overall work is good and it's still grow more.

great work with the story and characters.well made world but still it's need improvement.overrall it's a good work.the writing quality can also improve a little bit

good chapters and the writing is also good and characters are also good.overall it's a good work for a newbie I think it's clarify the mentality.

it is a well made but rookie book,story is good,characters are also good but I think there are some where you can change words and review for another time.

Top tire story,protagonist,characters and world building,powerful side characters.look like isekai with strong willed protagonist to achieve his goal and a little bit of funny scence.this is the best

An isekai vibe novel with a legit and savage protagonist.It have good characters,storyline fight scenes and a very good concept of story and writing.Dialogs are great.Overall its good and you won't regret after reading it.