Webnovel Author: Farah_Chnifakh

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Replied to Grammarly

But beneath the normal, lies the abnormal. Crime goes on in the cut-throat streets. People get robed, raped or killed. If you were too weak, you were consumed.

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Commented

wHY tHE fRICK iS tHE mAIN cHARACTER a cRY bABY

"Jayden!" I ran towards him, crying.

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Commented

WHAT4S HIS RELATIONSHIP WITH THESE TWO

"Yes. I promised Luke and Alora. I already talked to grandpa about it. I'll do my duty as a king of Flousia and as a doctor. I won't drop any of it." He said, as if he's really sure about it.

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Replied to Seojun_Lucas

Or worse, they may be related

I was surprised. My father is a Mafia boss? I've never imagined I was related to someone from an underground organization. I looked at Jayden. He was just sitting there and didn't say a word. I know his mom's family is also from an organization.

My Evil Boy Toy

Teen · sky_maiden

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Commented

I can smell that she will become the next queen.

My grandfather has been the King of Flousia for almost 60 years. It's been said that he needs to abdicate the throne at the age of 65. The law states that a monarch can rule until the age of 65. After that, they need to pass the crown to their legitimate successor.

My Evil Boy Toy

Teen · sky_maiden

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Commented

I guess pig and jaydan are siblings.

"Not really. Just a name. Somehow I heard that surname before, I just can't remember where and when. I'm sure we'll find more in Flousia." He said.

My Evil Boy Toy

Teen · sky_maiden

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Replied to Farah_Chnifakh

I don't understand from where the good morning came

My Evil Boy Toy

Teen · sky_maiden

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Posted

I love it, just some grammar problems. Also, I don't understand the main character: in the begening of the novel, she apeared as the bad play girl, now, I mean, I am still in chapter 21, she is sensitive, and more like a cry baby, she wants to protect Jaydan even thought she didn't protect herself. She is complecated. But in general, it's good!

My Evil Boy Toy

Teen · sky_maiden

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Commented

OMG the fl is a cry baby. Where is the bully peg that we know?

I didn't realize I was already crying. He pulled me into his arms, hugging me tight.

My Evil Boy Toy

Teen · sky_maiden

Farah_Chnifakh

1yr

Commented

WHERE was the kiss exactly, on the lips? on the cheek?

He was calling me but I didn't look back. My heart felt betrayed. Why didn't he push her? Why does it looks like he enjoyed the kiss? Why didn't he introduce me to her as his girlfriend?