Tungi - Profile

The plot and the lore of the clan are very interesting. I really want to know more of the clan it’s history. The villains seems really promising tho, as well as Sia. In some paragraphs the writing style seems a bit off, but overall still nice. I don’t really like personality of Rione. Musashi and Sia are likeable though. Story looks promising, looking forward.

The world building in this story is really great, places are well explained and are easy to imagine. It feels fluid reading it, although it it sometimes unclear whos talking. The main protagonist is very interesting and mysterious and you want to find out more about him. The side characters are also cool. In this story I see alot of potential, since the author built up alot of places to explore.