Carnage_Viking - Profile

yo. hi so your story is amazing yes but get order of the words correct u should get an. editor fluent in English grammar plz

the story is good yes but why the funky would u make a character so naive I mean she living with vamps . u make this the stereotypical story where beautiful girl doesn't no her power get protected by lycan cause he likes her cause she freed him . and if she ain't turning vampire .as she is basically full of life energy why the titlelike seriously whyyy?