BoomerJungle

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The beginning of this novel was extremely strong. Part one just finished and last 20-30 chapters really dragged down the overall story quality for me. Felt rushed, plots holes and seems like characters completely swapped up who they were or died with little to no explanation or reasoning. Hope the next part does a better job with these things and doesn’t continue down this same path. Really feel part one could of been better, but honestly this novel is one of the better ones on this site still.

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BoomerJungle

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ch 220 [First Game] [Epilogue] [1]

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BoomerJungle

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True fear. Being left with only John.

Eric looked at me seriously. "Be careful, pal. Don't leave me alone with John as the only reincarnators."

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BoomerJungle

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Rizz master Edward and Nihil. The tag team no one knew they needed. True wingman.

ch 206 [Final Event] [Closing Ceremony] [6] The Girl Named Layla

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BoomerJungle

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Nice

ch 195 [Event] [Celesta Twins' Birthday] [8]

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BoomerJungle

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I’m honestly surprised the chapter didn’t end with his brother immediately messaging him about having a girlfriend haha 😂 His brother loves gossip after all. Thanks for the chapter!

ch 79 Ch. 79: The Academy [4]

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Bro he gave Jayden his wing and a way to escape and still got left behind. Man better have a realization that Jayden and others aren’t guarenteed to help him no matter what he does at this point.

ch 185 [Event] [Enigma Red Dungeon] [45] Despair

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Brother is an L machine

The sound of a silver ring hitting the ground reverberated in the air. It was the same ring I had once offered to Mary.

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BoomerJungle

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Thanks for the chap 😌

ch 71 Ch. 71: Conference [3]

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Congratulations! And keep on writing! Look forward to catching up and reading more.

I can't believe I've reached ch. 50, lol.

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BoomerJungle

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See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

ch 43 Ch. 43: Refugee Camp [2]

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Just a little shaken up , don’t worry

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Classic. Professor better look for a new job 😂

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Hello 👋 hope you’ve been well. I’m catching up soon haha

ch 36 Ch. 36: Is This... a Test? [2]

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I feel like this isn’t part of the test but hey, good experience 😂

ch 36 Ch. 36: Is This... a Test? [2]

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BoomerJungle

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Poor kid :(

Lyra stood up, ignoring Carlos' hand and followed him.

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BoomerJungle

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I kinda just want them together. So pure

She walked toward me, grabbed my hands tightly and raised them.

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BoomerJungle

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Ty for the chapter!!

ch 34 Ch. 34: Settle Things [2]

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