Webnovel Author: Allen_Vinkaldr - Novel Collection

absolutely great novel yes it uses qs way to mutch in the first few chapters seriously every 1 or 2 words sometimes its just repetitive but a great novel anyways

Neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more chapters more updates

seriously I checked and as is used every 3-2 sentences

you use the word as way to mutch. In the first 2 minutes of reading I read as more than a hundred times use some different language than as please

A shamless author for sure. Warning this novel is purely for my enjoyment may be droped if I get sick of it. Do not in any case expect regular chapter releases. Extra warning - I will add whatever I desire so do not expect anything from me. If dissatisfied with the plot then don't read after all you decided to read this. 2nd Extra warning Don't expect me to read your comments and I will most likely change past chapters if I think it doesn't work with my story and certain characters will dispear from past future and present of novel if I don't like them or just change personality literally whatever I decided at that point. People who desire romance MC is a bit twisted mentally and physically.

overall q decent novel however their is something annoying me the tag says r18 however I've read to chapter 109 and their is not 1 r18 chapter.

Absolutely amazing novel. Have high hopes for the future of this novel and hope it continues for a long time.

Talk about being but hurt. Look at your messages, ignore a few and you just continue.

absolutely great novel wished this had more chapters and I hope you won't quite this novel and it continues for a long time. Absolutely was a great way for me to pass the time.

hmm🤨what😀okay😇let's do this😈

No I don't troll I state what I think I don't care about your opinion in any way qnd I didn't use it to annoy you but seriously the grammar scared me to death with how you asked others to use gramerly but yet your grammar isn't good either

great novel please keep up updates and don't drop it this is probably my favorite novel out of the many novels I have read and it's not unbearable gramercy like the others do please continue and please don't drop this. Great job author

Author cheers to a cruel comment. In the best way possible the writing of this novel is horrid and killed my hopes for this novel. From what I read the plot, how the story was progressing and the tags on the novel were all something I liked but the way it was displayed and typed ruined everything the sentences, just about every single one was flawed the way the auther typed a fight focused way to much on trying to display the sounds made it seem like the fighters were trying to have a beat box challenge instead and the first three sections were the worst. They could've been displayed so much better with some more work put into this novel I would've loved reading but hopes are meant to die. Author for future notes please try think more how to display the surroundings of the fight as it goes on to give the readers a better picture. A novel is similar to a movie I doubt many people that loved to watch their favorite TV show would like all except the characters to be completely black and sound bubbles to block the characters fighting whenever something happens it would be an annoyance, however the fighting is notmy point it was just one of the annoyancees I left with. the main point is to use more descriptive sentences to get your points across if that had happened even a little more in the story I would've loved to read this more however the novel reached the unbearable threshold. In future hope you improve on this. (Hope you don't let this hope die) Miracle you got so many five stars don't even know how you got those or maybie I am strange whatever though. Ruthless awser - Your writing is garbage and needs major improvement. Absolutely insufferable.

K I got to fix my outocrrect your typing terrified it and made it commit suicide

sorry I had to mess up my typing to the point aoutocorrect gave up as in my sentence is is

your sentence should have Theor as The and is on the last sentence as are

amazing novel reason why this is 4.8 instead of 5.0 is grammatical errors that accur a few times each chapter but besides that this is a nice novel

overall a great story, reason why this is 4.8 instead of 5.0 is because some words could be changed to better help the flow of the story but even then this is a wonderful novel.

I am back outhor its been three years and I decided that its time to retry this novel now that I've relaxed gender bender tag is gone lets see how good your work was but if I remember right you've always made a good novel and this novel was really good till it was gender bender insufferable.