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What do you mean by fake OP? Original.Poster? Overpowered or something?

I just read midway of chapter 2 and I dropped it real quick. That part where she thoughts that she has to come back to her original family because her 7 brothers will be big shot in the future and she can manipulate the real daughter family like a small bug. Like what kind of thoughts was this? First of all it's not her real family and she was so entitled to his 7 brothers achievement. It's their achievement and not yours.

Where are the paragraphs in all my comments? Is this a bug?

Chapter 98 review, I have to review in this part as I am thinking of dropping this book for reasons I will list after this.The book is good, at least with the standard in this site, this book is still above average. Here's my problem, It's the pacing of the story. I don't mind if the story likes to talk and made conversation and likes to accomplish a lot of scenes in a one day settings but at least made it more interesting. The story, at least for now, revolves into two romantic pairs, our main leads and the side casts. The side cast story was even more interesting than the main one but the author loves to interchange the chapters from this story to the other story from time to time, which makes the reading experience draggy. Like you are anticipating what will happen in the main story then the thrill will be cut off because the side story comes in. When I was also invested with the side story then the next chapter it'll turn into the main, you don't know how frustrating that is. There's a reason why books are usually has main cast where the story revolves instead of a lot. It's like reading different books at the same time, and there is a reason I don't do that, it's distracting and I like a linear story without interruption.Then came the characters, they're hypocrites. they are not perfect and I understand they were made like that to fleshed them out but that doesn't mean I like them. The ML just keeps piling up his lies without any guilt or apparent distress throughout and that shows character. He's manipulative, which is a red flag. If he can lie so much for his selfish needs to the one he likes even before they were in a relationship, then what about when they were in a relationship? Will he become honest? I doubt it because I think it's his nature. Then lets talk about the MC. I honestly don't know what's likeable of her. As a main character, she's pretty plain. I get tired reading her. She has no charm or anything admirable of her. I especially dislike how she can't own up to her own feelings. She's taciturn and wishy washy. She's not headstrong, she's not talented, not driven, she didn't even have motivation and goals. She has no aspirations and I honestly don't know what the ML saw on her. Why was she even the MC when her character is like an extra. She even has no hobby. She's boring and it's really hard to cheer for someone's love life when you don't care about her. I'm always questioning why the heck is the ML doing all of these things to this girl, what's so intriguing about her, please let us understand the author. I don't like that she's a hypocrite, can't own up on her feelings, and can't act up what she says she'll do.

It was good from the start and despit how it seems to be cliche it at least was done well, and still able to give more new and interesting contents than you usually get from this carbon copy books. I was genuinely enjoying the book but around chapter 61 onwards the translation just nosedive to the sea floor and it is sometimes not legible enough. I feel that it's still translated rather than the actual mtl but they just do it with no effort and care.

I'm in chapter 200 , and it did get better around 150s? with some new plots but it stagnated again. I sometimes find them overreacting and out of character. For a hundred chapters, there is so little development with the main leads. Like they just met at a business meeting and the MC got her period. There are so many filler chapters.

Miss/Mr. Author, just a suggestion with regards to slice of life stories. I've read a lot of them and they are my comfort books but yours seem to focus more on other characters' lives..The problem comes from how the more we go on with the story, the more you give more chapters and emphasis to these characters thus slowing down the story and giving less time to the main characters we already invested feelings with. I don't know about others but what I like about slice of life stories was the gradual growth and betterment of the main character as she/he lives everyday. Also, make it interesting. For example, a book about farming where the MC starts planting simple plants and then gradually evolved to rare plants and new variants of plants. There is excitement and growth in it. But yours seems stagnant with most of the time they are just having fun like eating dinner together or going on to dates. Honestly that's boring when it always happens. There is a lack of growth, yours though focuses more on emotional growth. Let's go back to my first point. Imagine a slice of life book about farming then after a hundred chapters, from a few chapters here and there will be chapters about the lives of other farmers. It's okay if they are interesting but if they were just talking about their daily lives, it would hardly be interesting especially if we're not still done with the MCs life.I really love your other books and I like that you hardly insert other characters chapters like in this book in those books but I'm really considering dropping this book but I don't want to because I have already fallen in love with the MC and ML. I am genuinely invested with how they are gonna grow and prosper.

pls don't tell me that you're on chapter 1095 and their engagement only happened that time?

It really had a good start but as chapter 100 onwards, it started to stagnate pretty badly. It's a good book from XMH as I have read books of her before and liked it, but this one's about a new premise and I might not be a fond of divorcee men, I still gave this a chance and I quite like how the story goes. I was quite shocked by the fast romance track and was secretly delighted that even a lot of wasted opportunities were not met during the initial part of the romance, I was still silently delighted and expected that the author made it fast as she got more things and plots to write about. And how disappointed I am when during chapter 100 onwards, most of the chapters are filler or chapters about the side characters. Author, are you expecting that we will be happy wasting our money on chapters that have little to no importance to the story. Like that two chapters about Hyson in his dorm just talking cheekily with his band mates, that chapter was unnecessary. One, the story of the main leads aren't even ripe yet, we still need more of them so putting a side character chapter really lowers your credibility as a writer in my books. Side characters chapters should only happen if they have relevance to the plot, but if it only talks about their boring life then that was just plain maney grabbing. Just adding more chapters so the authors can earn more money. Are you that uninspired? I think there are still a lot of things to talk about the main plot but I feel the story was regressing. I feel like it's too early yet to delve into the side characters life. The worst part was their chapters were very boring and not interesting, just snippets about their life and so many lengthy conversations that were just gushing about feelings and lessons in life. At least give them a plot, not just making them a buffer that makes the whole story boring.There are chapters about different side characters that are really not interesting so please get a grip author.I also like to emphasize how sometimes it is too cheesy. Like there are so many words said to the point that its giving me goosebumps especially with Hyson, he can be very or so very gushing sometimes that I felt that the author was just making him like this because she wanted to add word count to the story. Which is very counter productive. I was thinking how this simple plot can reach thousands of chapters and I thought there will be archs in the story but i am now worry if most of these chapters were just chapters that were there for the word count. I also advise the author to slow down on giving life lessons to the ML, I felt like one or two is enough but if most of the things MC says is conveniently adequate for the past of the ML, it's becoming unnatural and unneeded. Sometimes you need actions more than words to move on. Words can only do more but without actions it will just stay as words. Please minimize it, especially if the MC who was telling this was not the best emotional coach. Or at least if her character likes to talk about life lessons, don't just sprout things that the ML needs but also about random life lessons, there are also readers who are reading the story and could appreciate the lessons. So far the story was good and I really like the slice of life vibes I get from it but the random cuts about the side characters were not really relevant this early in the story. Let us be more full and satisfied with the main story first before you embark on other boats.

It's actually a good book despite a lot of people saying it's not worth it. It's well written, the plots are good, the characters are not cardboard cutouts, and the world building is unique and pretty well made. I think you'll not regret reading this one. I'm not gonna go over the good parts of this book as a lot of good reviews were already in the review section. Let's go over the parts that needed more work from the author.First is the weak romance. I sincerely think that the romance part was unnecessary. Especially if you are an author that was not good at it, the same with the author of this book. But before I elaborate, I still have to commend the effort of the author in creating at least a decent romantic plot where there is no harem and there was loyalty with the MC and FL. Now, let's go over why it's weak. First of all, I didn't get how they suddenly just said to anyone they know that they like each other when they never have ever have recollections and reflection of how they just fall to each other. The author made situations, that most of the time are forced, so that these two can have a moment. Which is bad, because it felt unnatural. One factor was also that the author was not good enough to create a romantic situation amidst the survival part of the story. The story has the tint of darkness and seriousness with death as the consequence if they just perform weakly. There is an emphasis towards being stronger so that they have to live. Pair this with a subpar romance that was just inserted while forcing some plots and sacrificing some plots for the main plot, will just bring down the story. The romance part was not placed correctly and it was also not that believable, strong, relevant, and endearing to the hearts of the reader or at least to me. One of the factors also was because I was already antagonizing the FL, I don't hate her character but if you are going to make a romantic interest, the readers should also love her the way the MC loves her, or at least they can see and understand the reason why he loves her. The FL was the cold and unemotional type so most of the conversation between the two are stale, it got better around chapter 300-400 but was still not a likable character in my eyes. Now that I am writing this, i can't really see how the MC liked her, I can't find reasons that I at least have to refute. There were just so few developments, then the author just decided to say yeah they are already madly in love with each other. The worst thing was, if it was Li Xiaoyu, his sister, or Zhou Xiaoyu(?), his maid, I can still understand and be glad with the romantic parts because they have chemistry with the MC and at least they are likable and reflective type of characters. It's like the FL is inside a black box while these two females are in two transparent box, I can understand them while I hardly even know about the FL. Towards chapter 500s onwards or at least chapter 700 where Im currently at, the story has become direction less. There was no clear motivation. Like the MC will state his motivation to find his brother and family but the way he acts most of the time was not in line with this, the author was forcing him to different subplots and he just went out with it. Its not highly obstructing but with all the chaos happening and will happen, it feels unrewarding. He was also not developing, it's been 300 chapters but he never had new abilities or improvements in his power. There was no new task, there was I think only two the one gave a basic copy and one was one dexterity. He didn't need new abilities, just some improvements like improved knowledge or fighting styles will do but nada he just got a new maid and every achievement of the maid will turn into him as he was her master. It's still entertaining but I was thinking the plot will elevate but it became static, I hope the next few chapters will be good.Just lessen the force plotting and have some motivation and direction and it will turn for the better.

It started good but for a story that focuses more on human relationships I can't help but get effed by some of the emotional plot holes. Despite having good characters, I felt that they're all cardboard cutouts that were not indistinguishable from each other. They will act out of character just to fit the whims and plot of the story. Honestly, if you won't name whose talking, you'll just think it's one character rambling. They're only good because I like they're background, but not how they act. The MC's character design was complicated, you'd expect her to act like this but she'll act differently instead, these happen many times in the story until I reached halfway in the story to get an overall view of her personality and I'll just say I'm not a fan of her. She's spoiled, impulsive, inconsiderate and selfish. She's an amalgation of both good traits as strong, kind, bubbly and innocent and those negative things I just mentioned that her character felt bloated and jumbled. It's not like her character was an impossibility but she was just not charming to my eyes,even if we compare her to those common MC's here in webnovel. Compared to them she looked made with more effort but was not made for me to be likable.The story also falls flat because it spend more talking and planning while the actions were so rare to happen. Their romance was so quick and unbarred that I felt the author takes too many words or chapters when they can just put it in few chapters. If there were conflicts or even spice plots to at least put some challenge to their romance, it could have been good. Honestly, I was so excited reading this because it has both elements of romance and magic fighting as seen in the first chapters but I am now in chapter 170 , which is half of the book already, but it only got one exciting fight scene which was only one or two chapter long. he rest, was them talking about their engagement and them taking vacations. The amount of chapters given to take a side character, that Okada, was so many already and I felt it's an insult to ones writing if you only can milk this character to bring conflict to this story. She's like an ant and was being played extensively by gods. Who'd want to read about someone playing with an ant, an ant can't hurt you so what's the catch? Why are we spending so much chapter and time for this cannon fodder?You see, it had a great premise even though the more extensive it was, the more it could easily get convulated. But this genre, though unique in the east asia novel world. It's not, when compared to western countries. If we compare this to them, this book really fails in its execution. There are so many wasted plots and opportunities, the conflict was non-existent and the character was lacking. It could definitely use an editor.

It gave off the vibe that this was a romantic story but as the author itself admits, this was a face slapping book. It actually has a good faceslapping scenes but I'm not impressed by how this was the goal of the author and not to create a good story itself.Here's the catch the book delves more than romance, I don't hate that but the sudden shift definitely looks like the author wanted to be different and not to present a repetitious book so she decided to suddenly shift genres. I commend the action but now the author is bringing things out of thin air. It's actually not that bad, it can definitely tide you off if you have nothing better to read but if you wanted to be critical it seems that the author has stopped bringing stability and instead pursued whatever they wanted to do with the story. It's a fast faced book that wont stay from arc to hundreds of chapters. The author has many plans for the future plots but it got overwhelming. Sometimes the logic was thrown out the window but if you're not critical then you might enjoy this one.

You can be generic and unoriginal to the story, that's not old news, but you shouldn't write this like the readers are stupid.So many glaring plot holes. Logics are all over the place. The author was careless in writing this. It could have been one of those novels you read despite how you have read similar books of it but still enjoyed it like eggs, sometimes you like it sometimes you don't but you can always take and have no complains. This one was made with no regards to logic and reasons which was a very big let down.

True, like she just bought 2 sacks of rice! and bunch of stuff in a super market and she suddenly spends half of her money, which was 15.5 million, for that purchase. The logic leave the conversation. And you can't sell a house or property that easily. That needs contract, buyer, time for it to be sold and a lawyer to process the documentation legally. Your property also has to be controlled by your guardian until you are in legal age. These kind of mindless and careless actions to details ruined the story and lowers the credibility of the author.

and the fact that his mother died because of this. It really felt that the author was just bringing out things or convenient plots as he/she went along with writing this.

When I first read this, I immediately noticed the similarity of an existing book that I forgot the title of ( It's From Sidekick to Bigshot). But I thought this was the original one cause I remember dropping that book a few hundred chapters later due to some reasons. It started okay and quite a good read even if it's a carbon copy of that book, the author just changed some things and names but overall it is blatant plagiarism ( I knew already now that this was the unoriginal one) until I've reached the part where the ML and MC interacts, and I was put off and dissatisfied with it. Because there was a comparison between two obviously similar books, it dawned on me that this was the counterfeit one. It's just so awkward and unrealistic how the story just flowed later on. I guessed no matter how you copied someone else's work and took their credit, it can't replace artistic talent that you never had.

I've read a few chapters and it looks very weird. Her character was just not on point and she acted without thinking. You know those characters that were portrayed smart by the author but acts stupid and has some questionable decisions almost every time, she's it.