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Drunken_master1964

Drunken_master1964

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everything must have a balance.

2023-10-14 Joined Global

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the mc is actually evil. so the author is not one of those wimpy authors who put villain tag only to write about a wimp with a hero complex, so that earned this novel 2.4/5 stars the problem is everything else. there are a LOT of typos, grammar mistakes, and misgenderings. MCs schemes, while sometimes pretty well thought out, more often than not, need plot armour to work out. which was a disappointment since the "highiq" tag gave me the impression that there would be more realistic schemes that relied more on the intelligence of the plan rather than plot armour. MC is petty and arrogant and has an overinflated opinion of himself. an example would be, Leng Yan, his contact within the law enforcement that covers up his crimes. he publicly showed off by kissing her in public in front of her colleagues, which was a move so braindead. I wonder if the author has any braincells left. by kissing her in public he's now making it infinitely more difficult for Leng Yan to cover up his crimes because now her colleagues know they have a relationship which will make them scrutinise her whenever she tries to cover up a crime that MC commits. and he did all that just to satisfy his petty and foolish pride, so he could get off on showing off. he would've gotten in trouble with the law and died multiple times if not for plot armour. he integrated with a dragon bloodline that was so powerful it would've killed him if not for a random god who randomly noticed MC almost dying due to the bloodline and helped him integrate with it. then a bit later, a female cultivator with a cultivation so high not even the system could evaluate her cultivation comes and tries to threaten MC yet somehow his super high level bloodline caused him to be able to summon fire that scared the female cultivator away. if this ain't plot armor I don't know what is. and lastly lemons. lemons are a great spice to a good story. a s*x scene that last 1-2 chapters every now and then is great. but when you do 4 chapters long lemons, then it's too much spice and it becomes annoying.
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did she see MC or not because this paragraph and the paragraph before it give very contradicting meanings

Finally she sighed in relief, as there was no trace of Zhang Wei around, and she can sort out her thoughts in peace.

Manipulative Harem God

Manipulative Harem God

Urban · SKuLL

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Replied to SKuLL
I agree.

The Dragon Lady is still virgin ° o °

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Manipulative Harem God

Urban · SKuLL

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discontent*

Many people in the white tiger gang were disconnect with this decision of the Dragon lady, as they were controlling the marine, which easy gives them access to water transportation, that can be used to earn large sum of money doing illegal works, like drug smuggling.

Manipulative Harem God

Manipulative Harem God

Urban · SKuLL

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than*

Other then them, there were many minor gangs but they were all indirectly working as underlings of these two main underworld gangs.

Manipulative Harem God

Manipulative Harem God

Urban · SKuLL

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woman*

The south was the turf of 'White Tigers' gang, ruled by a fierce women nicknamed as 'The Dragon Lady.'

Manipulative Harem God

Manipulative Harem God

Urban · SKuLL

Drunken_master1964
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Replied to Hahadavis
he's a villain. Does he really need a reasonable excuse to put her in her place? of course not.

Zhang Wei had learned about the Sky God through the system. He was the ruler of the higher plane and not someone to be trifled with. Nonetheless, Zhang Wei couldn't help but feel that Feng Xinyue needed to be put in her place. He made a mental note to come up with a plan that wouldn't attract the Sky God's attention.

Manipulative Harem God

Manipulative Harem God

Urban · SKuLL

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completely uninteresting and irrelevant. the story is good. it's just too bad its only 30%story and 70% infodumps. if this doesn't get fixed before I reach the locked chapters, I probably won't put coins or FP in this.

The cups were no less magnificent. Each one was formed from the finest porcelain, the exterior painted with a charming green and blue design that brought the beauty of nature into their midst. The rims were smooth and unmarred, and the handles were formed with an artistic flourish, the gentle curves fitting comfortably in one's hand. It was difficult to imagine that something so delicate could hold the weight of the tea inside it, but each cup felt substantial and sturdy.

Ascension of The Unholy Immortal

Ascension of The Unholy Immortal

Eastern · ChaosMajesty

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just say "the viper" adding "dark" makes it edgy and cringe
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