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It's a good little story. 😌 The ending was a surprise. I kind of wish I knew the real story now. It has the potential to be longer. Great job! 👍 👌

This was a great story! Everyone said it was beautiful and they were right. I wish it was longer but it did end at a right time. Great job!

This was cute and the sexy scenes were great. I think a lot of people could relate to it. Although, if one of my friends told me my boyfriend was ugly I would tell him to be nice or get out. But I'm glad Ian found love in the end. I wish it was longer so we could see him get married and really be ok with himself.

This was funny and really well written. There were no sexy scenes in it, which I think it needed so we feel more of a connection between Sergio and Alex. I feel like there wasn't any growth in there relationship for a long time even though it said they had sex. The passion wasn't there. Then suddenly they were together. That was frustrating. It was really funny though and the characters were great.

I love polygamy relationships! I want more of these three!! This was great 👍

WTF!!! I laughed, cried, and had an orgasm with this story! It really grips your heart ❤️ 💙 💜 and the sexy scenes are so hot 🔥 🥵 they burn! This is crazy good! Why doesn't this have more reviews? Great job author! Please write more stories!! I'm begging here!

This was cute. There was a lot of foreplay that didn't go anywhere which was disappointing 😕. They were interrupted by his sister and it went to the epilogue. It was well written and just cute.

Freaking awesome!! The sexy scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 😍 The other scenes were so cute and adorable. This is a great story!

This is adorable! The knight and squire have a real connection. 😳 The sexy scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 😍 The ending was so sweet I'm crying! Life, man. Life.

This is actually a really sweet story. It's a little cute with a lot of sexy scenes. 😍 I wouldn't mind reading a story that's a little longer with these characters. Great job!

It's cute and a well written story. In chapter 32 when they have their one sexy scene, it says Mattis changed from a bunny 🐰 🐇 😄 to human on the bed but had boxer shorts on, but in the previous chapter it says their clothes do not go with them when they shift... besides that is was consistent.

Yeeeeessss!! Eeeeekkkkk!!! Awww! Mmmmm.... These are just some of the noises I made reading this well written story. This is what a story should look like! The sexy scenes were hot 🔥 🥵 😍

I think it ended abruptly. There were no sexy scenes. It was very well written and I liked the characters but Myrtle didn't get what's coming to her. It seemed unfinished.

Yes!! The perfect romance story! The sexy scenes were hot 🔥 and everything was well written. I really enjoyed it. 😉

I love this story! LOVED IT! Can the author take requests? lol 😆 The sexy bdsm scenes are freaking 🔥 hot! The sweet scenes are so cute. The relationship between Jesse and Holden is perfect. I would recommend this. This is what a story should be.

I agree with the other comment on here. This is everything a story should be regarding the love story part. ❤️ 💕 The sexy scenes are hot 🔥 and the chemistry between Ian and Andrew is electrifying! Great job!

It's a cute, well written story. I was disappointed that it build up to a sexy scene and was even starting to get really good then the scene ended and they went to the next morning. It wasn't very satisfying. I would recommend it if you just want a PG-13 story.

This is perfect! The kids will give you a cuteness overload! The sexual tension between Darius and Nicholai is simmering, character development is beautiful... this is such a wonderful book! I highly recommend it!

Sorry I was writing on my phone pretty fast. I meant to say the first few chapters are mainly about the omegas bodily fluids, which could have been spent on character development. Also, the sexy scenes are not sexy. It gets confusing. And throwing in words like meat stick to describe a dick is stupid. Yes you can romanticize a man's genitalia and you get make it sound dirty and hot 🔥 but calling it a meat stick is gross man.

So a man's c*** or di** is called a meat stick in here... that is not conjure a good image. 😐 The first part of this book is a bunch of far off descriptions that stops the story from being clear. I hate that the first few chapters have not about the omega leaking milk and fluids then anything else. Those chapters could have been spent on character development rather than bodily fluids. The author makes the omega sound like a waterfall of breast milk and vag juice with some slick thrown in. Good luck to whoever is willing to actually spend their time getting through that pool and reaching the actual plot.