Webnovel Author: TheCrow - Novel Collection

Man, you really have no idea how rare it is to see a constructive criticism instead of full-on hate or insults and disapproval, which is warranted but still... Anyway, I really, really appreciate you writing this and I am well aware that the story has many faults and I think it wouldn't be possible to go back and fix things little by little, especially since I'm currently have other stories to write and the time is simply not enough. One more point I want to make is that this story was my first ever, and when I started, I literally knew nothing about writing and grammar. I just wrote what I liked so, in a way, it's a wish fulfillment. I wrote it after a long day at school and I did not think way ahead in terms of over-arching plots, if you know what I mean. Thank you for reading so far into the story and giving a fair perspective. If you are interested, I am actually writing the B route of this story(57 chapters out already) and it is free on Webnovel. It has a different plot but there are recurring characters and the world is also Astria but more fleshed out. I see it as a second attempt in directing the story in a better and less-faulty way. PS: I apologize for my grammar, especially in the early chapters of A route. English is my third language and I've mostly learnt it through Internet so I always strive to improve and give the best reading experience. Thank you again and I hope you find a good story that entertains you. Good day to you!

I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading!

Thanks for the review. Honestly, it has been a while since I've seen a constructive one. I'm glad you enjoyed my story, flawed as it is. and I will try my best to offer more description. I wish you a great day!

No, it's not.

I'm surprised and elated that you like it, considering how scuffed it is at the begining, especially. Thanks for reading

I'm dead already hahaha

yes there will be a chapter today. I've been sick and unable to post chapters in either of the chapters! Sorry

There will be a B route in which it's much better and there is no early meeting.

its back now.