why my story is possibly crappy 5yr

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hello everyone, i'm not so pleased to meet you. First of all: I don't give shit about your goddamn oppinnions. yes your oppinnions may sometimes be usefull but fuck that shit i'm only here to find a new hobby and to express myself in my first ever novel. second of all of you don't want to read some random newbies novel then go F yourselves i'm not here for you guys. and at last, thank you for reading my first novel i hope you enjoy
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