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Kenlinvert_L
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Rifurius
Extremely clicheed Plot and characters nothing Special about it character suddenly Out of nowhere gets rich without doing anything for it or having any risk involved.
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Mvet
Very good set up and original idea with good living character which can be connected to. The ability is balanced allowing for growth of the character being lengthy not like most system novels were the power level skyrockets
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TheNormalMan
Bad,no chapter in month, and pretty much copying another novel I know.
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reef2722
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lurkinghermit
I would say its a good story if your board and just wan't to read something, Its just that its your typical system type story. Ignore this part just writing to get the 140 characters
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ElFlazh12
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k4team
I first read this a year ago on R*y*lRo*d, and it hasn’t been updated in the last 50 days. If the author is genuine then this is a good read, otherwise I can’t really enjoy “Copy and Paste” work.
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liontrappedincave
So goodddd!!!!!, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PLZ UPDATE MORE AUTHOR-sensei release! Release! R lease! Release! Release! Release! Release! Release! Release! Release a, release!
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BobStudio
The plot sounds like Trafford Trading Club novel. I mean both the mcs in each novel can make someone`s wish come true with something valuable like lifespan
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Taku
I find this novel very interesting! It is just my type that gives the feeling of having deals with the devil (mc).
Furthermore I find his abilities very interesting while not being OP it has room for growth.
In conclusion this is a good novel do not hesitate to give it a try!
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KoFu_
A solid 2.
Great idea. But when you introduced the arena before even began to develop the life merchant story made me sigh.
So much waste opportunities of a good story.
So many loops holes.
A will name a few that bother it me:
-> The contract only specify that if he tell someone about him the contract became null. So what happens in that case ? The money magically returns to him and he keeps the gained life years ? The other party forgets about him ? Either case this magical ability will be very alluring to the underground world. If someone force to say who gave them money. You can imagine the consequences.
-> Even in a offshore account he can't spend money in his home. He needs to launder money to appeared to be a legitimate gains. If not the government will be suspicious.
-> What happens if someone ask for something that he can't do? What happens if he can't fulfill his part of the deal ? No alternatives explored.
-> Range of the merchant world ? Somewhat we can deduce that is less than 100 meters while he follows the girls back her home.
-> Body-fucking-change-pill and he offered that pill to a girl in a toxic relationship. Not even thinking about trans ? Fame wannabes girls/boys? This people will literally die for that opportunities. Even add a clause that if they reach fame they will deposit a certain percentage of money each month.
-> You changed the requisite of omnipotent sight from lvl 2 to 3 from 10.000 to 1.000.000 and somehow the mc completed that in less than a month ? Bs.
Sorry. Dropped the novel. Maybe even will write a similar but logical story since I like the premise.
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mortalMika
this story about a guy turning into devil (hero) scaming people or i say make theirs dreams come true in exchange for lifespan..anyways guys give this novel a shot we will see how this story develops..btw i still did not read a single chapter hhhhhhhhhh crazy right ..borderd people do weird suff..i hope this is a good story coz i already give 4 stars author.
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gorgeously
Well its the first time in my life being 1st in comment section so for my first greeting , first I would like to thank the author for this novel . then dot dot dot dot ............................ Is 140 done? .. Not yet? .......
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