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PettyOfficer: There are like 20 reviews from two people giving this 5 stars and I have to put my foot down.

I’ve read up to chapter 18 and I want to blow my brains out. Wanna know why?

It’s not lacking chapters. It’s not the decent grammar or the general narrative style.

It’s the overuse of clichés, emphasis of “plans,” and useless characters. Also, the dreadful POV shifts.

For clichés, we got MC Mark, a “badass” anti-hero/hero mix. We got a random mother and daughter burden for escort. Then there’s the strong and uncooperative love interest with her friend. Oh, and I almost forgot! There’s the unnamed male employee as the servant.

Some bus is in an accident and then zombies come out from it. It’s the apocalypse and somehow, the zombies have hacks that allow them to bypass crowds and kill any good guy with a gun. No police or guards! No phone service, so you can’t call for help!

That means everyone is getting slaughtered! MC steps in to lead everyone to safety! Oh no! Someone needs help, so he goes to save them with his badass one-handed shotgunning skills! He got it from a zombie guard that happened to attack him!

But he can’t just save them without showing how all other guys are trash! A mom gets grabbed by dying man! How she is still alive when running from zombies with her daughter? Who cares! Love interest shows she can fight, but MC saves her because he must be better!

Oh? A rich fatty goes crazy and holds everyone hostage in his base? He locks out MC and kills someone with a gun? Guess it’s detour time for MC to go save them because they’re helpless without him! No need to try and reason with the fatty.

Don’t worry! It’s all according to “plan!” MC loots a place and makes the path secure. Oh, a detour to the detour? Oh, it’s time to save a new love interest? Oh, we have to get the hero a heroic entrance instead of assassinating the gangsters. We’ll have the MC talk to the Boss as he r*pes the girl because this is the “plan!”

What!? The Boss has a gun? No worries! MC knew and wanted to make sure by talking to the gangsters! He just wanted to get a better shot. What? He only shot off the Boss’s arm and kicked a gangster’s balls? What “plan” is this?

How will he survive now? Oh? It was instant KO? As expected of MC, the other gangsters run away since they luckily don’t have guns. Now the MC is the hero. Let’s have TWO chapters of FLASHBACKS to show this pampered and beautiful love interest having a hard time with her family, friends, and fiancé.

Don’t worry! Literally disarming the Boss was part of the plan! He’s bleeding out, but don’t worry! MC must have a moment with his love interest! Oh, the Boss died? Time for a new “plan!” The fleeing gangsters attracted the zombies away? As expected of the “plan!” They never could have lured them back! Even if they did, MC had “plans” for it!

Ignore that his people had to kill zombies attracted by his gunshot! Hey, that mom can come over here and clean up the love interest. That gangster Boss r*ped her all over just by himself! She’s coated in his slimy seed!

Great! We’re ready to move on! Ignore how the daughter keeps up. Man-servant has been carrying the injured mother the whole time!

Do you understand how tedious and discomforting that is? It’s a droll format. It relies on cliché encounters to build up a harem team because the author doesn’t want to have MC alone. We go back and forth between characters only so the MC is no longer the focus of the story.

It’s fractured but whole, like a fractured butt hole. Incomplete, but complete; empty, but full.

Mutagen
1 month ago
If it will continue this way this isn't a novel but a **** for me. You just said that the mc reads a lot of novels so act like the one who read it. "I'm not like the old Bai long who is brainless/idiot" but it looks the same for me. Dont reason out that he is a villain, he has seven carnal or even the ring of chaos that affects his mindset. Readers of novel would think twice before doing it because they know that there are heavens outside the sky. View More
The Perverted Evil Cultivator · C18
2 months ago
Reading Status: C0
It's a harem themed novel for general audiences. I see ..... 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 View More
Harem God of Origin (ATG)
2 months ago

TheFluffyMan: He can have anything he want and he ask for freaking system....And worse,its the system with mission....Come on man,you are in the situation where you can have everything,and you ask for template system?...And also with that OP grandpa backing you,why didnt you just throw yourself inside EX rank cultivation world where there's few realm to conquer,beauty to rap...I mean,to intimate,and some OP body,soul cultivation technique with an mc as your friend or senior brother so you can sit down and eat some popcorn while watching real life 3D planet slashing,star smashing and ancestor face slapping???!!!!....

Overpowered Irregularity (Pause) · C1
3 months ago
Wtf View More
I am gonna eat your pussy now!! · C1
3 months ago
Really? Didnt get anything? Its a quest right? Somebody ask him to eliminate the threat. He get nothing after killing the boss at the same time asking him not to be greedy?! Wtf. Com'on man. View More
Versatile: Alternate World · C0
3 months ago
Wtf is this View More
God Hacker of Lust · C0
3 months ago
Brainwashing is the best thing to do for training orphans . Making henry's picture all over the place . When sleeping his picture is on the top of the bed , feet side etc . Makijg them remember that all they have is what henry gave to them . View More

Falbium: You should make Henry father figure for those orphan that will be trained for a securities company, keep their emotion(if you want ), teach them about (tech, weapon, driving, cooking and..... ), training like Saitama but reduce the number.

For the division frame, I don't know maybe later the idea will come to me

Rebirth 1973 · C19
4 months ago
Hey investing in internet will boost his reputation since its free to use . View More

Vintage11: What about Internet and Googe???

Rebirth 1973 · C18
4 months ago
Hey do you feel it too? I just keep scrolling down then next chapter . I mean there's no thrill reading at all because of how fast phase the story running . Im thinking if I skip the 30 chapters then read the latest chap would he already establish oracle, google, bought 1 of holluwood giants etc. Well if thats svck. View More

FitraCahyadi: can you make this story deeper. because the story is lacking in feeling

Rebirth 1973 · C16
4 months ago

FitraCahyadi: can you make this story deeper. because the story is lacking in feeling

Rebirth 1973 · C16
4 months ago
10% is good to hold his employee's . You can't always think that nobody will not be tempted if others offered them much higher salary . He cant always be in the company so he will entrust it to them. View More
Rebirth 1973 · C16
4 months ago
Another authour using "you" . Game over . View More
Game Øver (Dropped) · C0
4 months ago

OnePun: Don't put cliffhanger in the middle of cooking PANCAKES. That's universal offence. You have no idea how many godly beings you have offended. Just wait for your retribution.

Chameleon: My True Face · C42
4 months ago
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Rebirth 1973 · C7
4 months ago
Hello? Are you still alive? View More
The Sixth Mage (R-18 for smut) · C17
4 months ago

Thor: The content has been deleted

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3
4 months ago
I wonder if the author is taking advantage of us reader . Readers now is not like the readers 3-4 years ago where we still okay with force plot of chinese novels. View More
The Lust System · C20
4 months ago
His first wife knew him before his second wife . View More
Dual Cultivation · C140
4 months ago
Im fed up with "You" . So I'm parting with "you" . Goodbye to "you". View More
Hollywood Delight · C28
4 months ago
What about a bird . A woodpecker ?? Did you know how fast its head could move?? Of it could become a girl monster you can have a nice BJ haha View More
Reincarnated in Long Live Summons · C13
4 months ago
Keep up dont go down View More
The Sixth Mage (R-18 for smut) · C9
5 months ago

SilentByakko: It was a wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see more of your work!!!

The Sixth Mage (R-18 for smut) · C9
5 months ago
HAHAHAHA Im done with this novel HAHAHAHAHAHA View More
The Harem King · C18
5 months ago
For petes sake you dont need make him laugh everytime View More
The Harem King · C11
5 months ago
I agree, not unlocking the seal in his memories is a pure nonsense. Although he didnt seems to care to the present world at least with those memories he should've gain a little more understanding to his surroundings. For example ruins etc . Unless those memories itself is purely nothing like living inside the house and nothing more . View More

Henki: It's just the Author who wants to put some mysteries and cliffhangers. That's what people call "Forced plot". His excuse of being afraid mixing personalities is stupid, he is supposed to be thousands years old, can 20 years of memory really change something?
But I guess that if he did recovered his memories, the Author would have to work harder to find another plot...

Dual Cultivation · C133
5 months ago
Where did you read it? View More

Lordyken: The content has been blocked

The City of Terror
5 months ago
Dududududungeon View More
What do you mean I'm the king now?? · C19
6 months ago
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6 months ago
Week not weak . View More
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