Chapter comments on the chapter First Blood of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

I thought he was a small and ordinary rat. But it turns out he throws spears... How does he look now?

Poor Wolves won't ever know their destruction was caused by that ****** action...

i sure hope you explain how this system works fast im losing interest already you only have 27 chapters as of today and i don’t get the feeling you’re planning to explain soon, as if turning him into a rat wasn’t enough he can’t even gain exp ??? i mean how else would you go about doing that other than killing and doing mission right ? in which killing earns more so if you don’t plan on implementing that then how can you call it an rpg ??????? 😐😐😐😐😐😐

We won't forget you spear-chan

I was expecting him to say "I dealt it ! It was me" ! XD

Did anybody else think of pickle Rick🤣

How can the beaver support it? -- This is supposed to be 'How can the beaver bear it?'. This sounds like a mistake a french person would make, are you French?

The best Mc

Thank for the chapter

EXP

Thanks

hahaha! a rat looking for angry birds!!! hilarious!!! 😂😂😂

Thx

Thanks for the chapter

Death to the wolves!!! Haha That made my day

List to kill 1.that stupid Goddess 2.all the stupid wolves

Instant death from a stick carried by the magical rat isnt really possible, unless he aimed it right through an eye socket and pierced the brain. And he cant really aim... Too early for a rabbit kill imo

Ghøst wasn't here

Human anatomy are well adapt in throwing a spear. Rats dont have that kind of anatomy. Thus this story are slowly following the path of not a logical novel (unless an explanation is provide). Its fine just not exactly my cup of tea.

Thanks for the chapter 😉