Chapter comments on the chapter Following the Trace of a God of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

Will he ever fix the system? :((

Yeah without the system and him changing to this place it does seem like another story. But it seems like we went from warhammer to magic the gathering. Or DnD.

well, the story goes to another stage... sometimes the story has to change, sleek has grown too powerful and the world of aria was getting a bit 'cramped'. now we finally gotta see whats the deal with the 'nine heavens' and the gods... and hopefully the story will go to its usual pace.(System i miss you!)

i really like the world you were building was interested to see how the orcs and goblins were... this feels like a board wipe

I miss oslo's funny random comments and the system helping him underdstand himself and his capacities... Damn. It's nice but i really miss that... His conversations with Oslo were so fun.

Randompeoplelivesmater#

At this Pace this story Will not be a long one. 145 and he already is capable of fighting gods...

I think he might need more godly power to fix and possibly upgrade the system

💀 Thanks for the chapter!! 💀

8-2-4 Loverboy in Rain

They see my stones rollin They hatin Patrolling they tryin to catch me ridin' dirty...

Thanks - Gracias

Thanks for the chapter~!

Class: Cthulhu from/of Rlyeh???

Thanks

Damn it ..I need more sleek

next chapter PLIZ > mode FRENCH = VITE VITE VITE PLIZ ^^

Thx

Well well well... Looks like the story pacing is too fast.. lolol... And Sleek doesnt even know who he is.. how can we the reader know who he is... I feel this is realy random.. but.. I want to know how this will lead us to...

exp