Reviews of True Space Mage by 2someawsome - Webnovel

It is completely different from the other wizard novel. The magic sistem is clear and the main character don't learn other types of magic. He can only concentrate on his magic and how to use it

[As of Ch 127] The first thirty-something chapters were boring, they did lack any form of suspense or hardship. But this being the first work of the author, it's getting better and better as the story goes. It had me drawn in at the later chapters. Also, the chapters aren't too long (at least initially), so it won't take too long. Writing quality is ok. The author said it was written on a phone at one point, and it does look like it. There are some typos, spacing may not be up to code; but the grammar itself is good. Overall it's definitely readable, you won't have to spend much time on what a typo could mean. The main issue I have is that the author apparently reincarnated with a system in another world. The last sign of live I could find was the last chapter, the patreon is dead, no activity with that username I could find on the internet either. As the other reviews mentioned, it isn't a good ending either. I would also be hard-pressed to point towards a good point to stop reading and be satisfied. What I did read (after, lets say, the half-way point) was definitely worth the weekend I binged it on tho. World building is believable, and I didn't find a mayor point at which the rules established were broken. Overall, I would recommend the read.

I enjoyed reading the first 50 episodes, but eventually I got tired of the MC being a retard and breaking down every time he kills someone. I will read it again if the mc gets smarter lol

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This would be an awesome story but it hasn’t got an update in a year I don’t know if the author just stopped writting it or just moved the whole thing to another platform. the spelling mistakes aren’t that big a deal, but why not atlest like sell someone the story so they can continue writting it. Also the details in some spots its hard to tell what is happening. This could have been a great book but it never got finished.

Honestly, pretty big **** you to the author, you just dropped the story right before a big event? Really? Come on man. I get you being busy, but at least leave a note. Also, spelling and grammar is pretty meh. At least read your own story, there are so many small mistakes that add up to annoy the **** out of me.

Ok, the story has a good premise, ok background and meh characters so far, but a MAJOR problem is how the author implements the mc’s growth, he makes the mc seem useless stupid so he can learn new stuff, yes it is a good way of doing stuff but why do you have to make the mc so stupid instead of making a harder challenge. So far the mc is deemed a ‘genius’ but he’s retarded in every aspect, he doesn’t even use his past life knowledge to it’s worth. Might as well have the mc be a thinker instead. It becomes more noticeably the more the story goes on. The mc only uses the logic and equations and some random ideas from his past life. And I know the author doesn’t want to have the mc to be OP but that doesn’t mean the mc has to be retarded, you know give him less power rather than make him stupid. Oh and the grammar is terribly, he some how messes up the important words but get the filler words almost perfect... like he is trying to annoy the readers. Welp, best of luck readers to this book.

Great book in terms of world building and realistic characters, there are some big issues with spelling and grammar as well as the characters lack of imagination to the point where the readers feel embarrassed for him. Worth a read purely because of the world building

Overall a good novel especialy for an original , one of my favorites for sure. Good world bulding and character developement just wish there were more chapters but they will came sooner or later.

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This story is really cool ! The character are well designed the World Background us really good and mysterious. Can't wait for the release ! I recommend it.

I enjoyed reading this, but the sudden cut off just left me feeling empty. It could have been a really good novel, but leaving it alone killed it

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A shiny jewel to differ from typical reincarnation stories. Although the mc isnt super op, the author keeps the story moving. I like the numerous characters and political themes of the story. Ancious to see how it all plays out!!!

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Hasn't been updated in over 9 months, don't bother reading. It honestly wasn't that good to begin with, as the mc has literally no creativity or personality

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New update will be nice. Sometimes we are lost in a plot what being has it been killed. What archives please clarify that. It was not a bad read though, really like it.

A very good story with admirable character progress and convincing use of sceintific foundation to build up the capabilities of the hero the only problem is the prolonged hiatus

There are no updates for months. The story develops slowly and even though the main character is a reincarnated mathematician it takes him months to develop something with his magic. It just feels that he's really unimaginative. It's only in the last few chapters we see anything interesting. Sad that Author possibly droped this right when it was about to get good...

Eh. I just had to stop. While the story tried to subvert standard trope in an inventive way it did it so poorly that it only made the tropes seem useful. Aaron feels bland listless and really kinda dumb. His intelligence seems deeply informed and the exploration of fantasy magic in the system is really weak. I just couldnt take a blade of compressed air on a sword seriously. Its bargain ben lightsaber. No trash grade and light saber aint nothing without transcendent skill. Mage people are dumb. They dont have self defense skills and the author doesnt take the time to inventively think of ways to use magic according to his own system then insists on having fights be a thing and not relying on grasping modern techniques. Where is the translocation. Battlefield warping. Portal redirections. And miscast spells. Did that guy never read fantasy. Histories strongest founder was more inventive.

Please write more and finish until then hers my review. Its interesting and makes me appreciate the work you put into the world just updates are slow currently

There seems to be a decent cause - and- effect throughout the story. The mc is a character rather than a pure self insert, which is nice. The prose leaves something to be desired, but scenes seem to build well, and there has been no deus ex machin moments I've noticed. I only hope the writer didn't die, or something seeing as the updates stopped 6 months ago

There were a number of misspellings, wrong word usage, grammatical errors and made up words that does not even exist in the dictionary (e.g. Fabregasted). It's like the author didn't even took an effort to proofread his work and just immediately posted a chapter as soon as he finished typing it. But despite all that, I got intrigued with the first few chapters. Sadly for character development, there is no development. MC is dumb even though he is supposed to be intelligent. MC is not creative or imaginative enough. MC is too weak and chicken hearted. There is plot armor There's no specific story line.

This book is so slow and the main character has no personality. ".."..."..........................................................................

It has been months since this story was updated and I don't think anyone should start this until it has been officially updated again. The story itself isn't bad but if it just ends in the middle of a story arc with no resolution then why start this story at all.

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a good story really appreciated but no updatess are there so due to which i want to say please let me start it,s volume 2 and make it,s end but i want you to restart the story