Ah, such a beautiful story. Ahem. Sorry, got caught up with my worshipping.
In any case, the writing quality is pretty good, thanks to the editor. There are still a few places in which grammer needs to be checked over though(but this is natural. Humans can't make everything perfect).
Stability of Updates...hmm...for the most part, the updates are coming really well, just a few times couldn't meet the deadline(haha, better than good ol'sloth me)
Everything else is just perfect! The way characters never appear the way they do, the growth of the children, and of course, our MC. It was hilarious reading the interaction of a plant and the demonic bull. XDXD
I think the world background is great, and it actually sounds realistic, not just some bullcrud stuff being thrown at you.
I find it is extremely easy to be hooked. I swear, it sounds just like those best-selling books.
here I'm gonna boast my insignificant boast. I PUT IN THE 100TH POWERSTONE. SO PROUD OF MYSELF :D:D:D:D:D
And that's about it. time to go back in my worship mode~
I truly love it. If there is word to define what I feel, I will say it's about freshness. This story reminds me about a RTW fanfiction about being reincarnated as rock and wielding magic, except this one actually have original framework so it has more materials to develop.
The only concern that I have is the sentence structure, it might be some residual dialect of the author that makes me have some difficulties to get the nuance being implied. I also found some sentences/phrases that I believe can be shortened/rephrased and still retains its intent. The need of the editor is quite high for this work, nonetheless the story itself is amazing, it's a really great take on the way of plant's life. Do you know that, after reading this story, I did self reflection about our treatment over plant and animal...
I will add this, you might add a chapter about cultivation jargon especially the power level, to clear some ideas
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....................................................................................................................................................... john is awesome i really like this novel.
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I don't like this, but I do recommend it for anyone who also likes this kind of novel and this genre! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
why is it when i read the story i know what everyting happen and means, but when i write this review i dont remember anytingh is that normal does that happen other people also.
i like john the bush and he think that he wasent strong when he was a person but i think he was stronger than he thinks.
it hard to write my toughts, i like this story i hope other people do to.
I love this story, so I'm really hoping it resumes. Unique protagonist that avoids the toxicity of most Chinese protags, the bush is a genuinely good guy that's not scheming for an advantage.
i am writing a review becouse i really love this story and it is really good the quality is good and everyting i sgood in this story.
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I like the story thatβs all I have to say but since it has to be 140 charters long Iβll say the part I liked the most was the comedy I am easy to humor though and this is my first review I think.
Im looking at a phenomenal novel with tremendously high potential which can practically go to the top if it's safe from anything ruin it i wish you the best my brither
Plant cultivatior point of view is new to me. It has been an enjoyable read so far. Only problem is with the writing but that is Minor and easily fixed with time.
Keep going strong. If you keep this up. I promise on my life that you will be in top 30
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A very interesting take on the reincarnation plot device. I found myself enjoying every chapter as there were many surprises on the way. The author brings up many interesting points and the look into what plant cultivation may be like is also very fresh and new.
The story features many likeable characters, from Elanor to Laurel, from John to Joe. You'll find yourself smiling warmly at the antics of the 'hill friends'.
The comedy is not laugh out loud funny, it may appeal to others more as everyone has a different sense of humour. However that does not mean I did not find it entertaining, I found myself finding many sentences quite humorous, I would say it was on the verge of making me giggle like a little school girl but not laughing out like a crazed hyena. Yet again, it may be different for others. For me, the comedy was not the strong point of this novel, but how interesting and creative it was, I found myself reading each chapter and becoming increasingly interested in the cultivation system and the world in general, some questions are answered and some are not, this makes a good balance of mysteriousness.
The quality of writing is very decent, the only problem that the author suffers from is the lack of commas in some places, I read quite fast and I sometimes became confused for a second when a sentence changed topics. Other than this, everything else about the literacy quality is great and there are little to no problems to be found.
In conclusion, this is a novel that I will constantly keep coming back to as long as the Author keeps on writing, unfortunately this novel is not getting the full attention it deserves as evidenced by the low number of comments on each chapter, but I feel that as long as the Author keeps this up, this may very well change. Which I hope it does as this story is quite entertaining.
Rating:
Writing Quality 4
Stability of Updates 4
Story Development 5
Character Design 5
World Background 4
Final Rating: 4.4
Really good, I look forward to the continuation!
He falls into my library without hesitation
really a unique story, I like the concept
Follow the cultivation of a plant and stories that spreads around it.
it would be so good that a sect / city / clan settled on the hill after the village's history x)
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