Chapter comments on the chapter Title Hidden of the book Mortal to Omnipotent

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heavenlydogdog
Did you just time skip us in a clever way that wasyed a free world travel ticket to not make our mc more op you sick bastard you are a genious 🤔
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Immortal_Studiant
Please more (◞‸◟)(◞‸◟)(◞‸◟)(◞‸◟)(◞‸◟)(◞‸◟)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)ヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノ
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Lypros
Good mind fuc...
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YassineDSuLtAn
thank you for the chapter i like your story
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codeless
Thanks for the chapter author 👍 👍
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Starlin
Ingenious trickster
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World_Atlas
Thanks for the chapter
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TrapsAreBest
I know this most likely won't be read but, My only real problem so far is his over specialisation, as of right now he only really uses his doujutsu, swords and speed and this results in his physical strength and defence lacking as well as causes him to be more predictable in battle. I would recommend giving the mc a bloodline like Jugo's (Naruto) or an ability such as Crush magic (Fairy Tail) even the boost ability of Boosted Gear (High School DxD).
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Trek
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Trek

Thanks for the chapter~
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Trek

Why does mc keep making these useless powers?
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IdleWolf07
What the hell!! Before experience fairytail world he already called back. And only to spend some and spend time. I think this useless..
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TranscendenceCat
Fuck! We just timeskipped
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MazniBanichki
Thanks for the great chapter.
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Loldu2626
thx for chapter
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Bosmi
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Bosmi

I really want to know what will Obito tell him
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TheHanged_Man
Fucking **** that was a good one !! Bravo !! First time I see it xD
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kingkushal
Bro that was a genius play to balance up everything... Good going 👍
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