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Ebo_Eboo
Un fanfic increíble la forma en que íntegras la temática de dragón ball con mc está muy bien desarrollado solo espero que pongas mas en escenario su relación con Natasha ellos tres reaccionan muy bien
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Ebo_Eboo
Es increíble la forma que incluyes los poderes sin exagerados sino progresando poco a poco además de las dos relaciones amorosas se desarrollan bien
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LORD_OF_FIRE
need more
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Matthew_Balaguer
Good fanfic novel should got a 5 star review......................................... Pretty unique 👌😍😍. ..................... ............
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Matthew_Balaguer
Its pretty good, better than most marvel fanfiction... Hope it update
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Ebo_Eboo
Un increíble fanfic que combina dragón ball con otro universo es el primero que leo que lo integra muy bien sin exagerar las cosas y igualmente las relaciones que le estás creando al mc también son divertidas
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Kyosuke_Uchiha
Is this harem ir polygamy I just need to know because the tag isn’t there. The first chapters also made it seem like a harem or something........
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ScottyTheD
To the Author, I suggest you get an editor or someone who is good with english to help you re-edit your story and make it easier and more importantly, enjoyable to read.
The grammar is bad, the spelling is bad, there are pointless filler paragraphs that add nothing to the story and just weight it down and make it a chore to read.
I really wanted to read this story because I like the premise a lot but with all the previously mentioned problems it's just not worth the grind and mental gymnastics it takes to make sense of each paragraph.
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SpoiledSecrets
Not bad but I was wondering if there's going to polygamy or a harem in this? Cuz most fanfics have them and it get's boring when they all have the same aspects.
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Maurz
So far it's somewhat readable. I can tell what's happening in the story, but by god is the grammar awful. Story moves a bit strangely and i'm not sure how I feel about you mixing up DC and Marvel elements. It never ends well.
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Evesty
all i have to say is that its cool story no idiots in reviews and yeah
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Alien_Space_Bat
is this good in later chapters?? early chapters are very bad.....girls are brainless around MC.... characters aren't thinking straight... conversations are very much a mess....even world background is a mess.....scene break are very confusing.... grammar and spelling is also bad.
Concept is very good but... presentation is bad.
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Hunter_101
waste of time at the beginning he went to school and after 4 chapters he was still at school and I stopped reading it irrelevant information plus mc is kinda dumb if you have lived to lived and in one you are a God your facial expression shouldn't change When your thinking i understand that he doesn't have powers but mental things should be there and Autor only says he has spiky black hair that's it
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Ferro
Writing Quality: 1 - Reason being there is always a mistake, the use of comas is nonexistent and we can see the lack of motivation to improve in this regard for author. 41 chapters with the same consistent errors.
Stability Updates: 3 - I don't really know so I will give a middle score for this one as I cannot form a solid opinion.
Story Development: 4 - In my opinion this is a really interesting take on this world with enough background to not make it like it is white\black. Solid progress and character introduction while maintaining the readers interested in what is to come.
Character Design: 2 - I feel some characters are really good like Colson or Peter Parker. But there is the issue of the downgrade on the intelligence of female characters like Natasha Romanoff (black widow), as I think this will be a harem despite not having the tags or something. This Black Widow fell in love with mc a few days after staying with him due to a mission of surveillance from Fury. This is honestly a trash development in my honest opinion, reason why I detest harem or any development like this as it feels to forced for me to take seriously.
World Background: 5 - It is marvel world.
I read up to chapter 41 to come to this review. Remember to read up to at least that point to form your own opinion on the matter.
Final score: 3 - Passable, interesting, I read this waiting for the main novels I read. Perhaps this would improve in the future but I don't count on it, the Black Widow incident will repeat for any female character to come I believe, and I don't like that. Will keep reading though, as this is really interesting for me.
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interesting stuff. more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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Zen_Ryuga
This is an amazing fanfiction, I love everything you did with it, the grammar errors can easily be ignored due to the marvelous concepts that you write to us, I kept hoping that someone from his past life in the Dragon ball world would recognize him, he is not overly strong as he loses his powers, but he doesn't immediately gain op strength and flattens everything, there is a decent plot, he is not a saiyan either, I think you should change the title because it can be misleading, other than that, excellent story, I am looking forward to more.
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Edgelord69
While i like a slow paced story, this is slowly make me bored, what i mean is it is ok to give credit to side character but a good story will also make the development of the MC clear it is not training maniac if you think it is what i mean. But hey this story is pretty interesting with DBZ and Marvel crossover but i remember this is a fan fiction, while i like slow paced story but i worry for the continually of this story like i doubt some fan fic can finish it's story with it's slow paced development, even only minority of story in this platform reach 200+ chap. The grammar for me is average for non english speaker (like me), character design is much but too shallow, world background too small and too little surprise element. I think that's it from me. Hope this review can give the story better development 😄
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