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Midea
I like the flow of the story. It's refreshing. Even though there are some grammatical errors, it's not that disturbing 🙂
I hope the Author will update soon 😁
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Nini_16854
Stumble to this novel by accident since I got nothing more to read. The story looks promising, unfortunately there is no more update. Hope it will be continued soon
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Xiaoping
This story is utterly captivating from the get go. It's original and the character development is progressing well. Just the right amount of mystery. Not your obvious story a hidden gem! Can't wait for the next update
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DeJeL
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: I see that you did well in timing out your first 8 chapters, but to just go a month w/o a single post, and not even inform your readers as to why... I'm sorry, but I can't help but down rate your Stability of Updates. "All her with as their symbol will crumble." I think you meant 'with her' rather than 'her with'. Also, I suggest running your work through a grammar checker, such as Grammarly.;,;.
Positive Feedback: Well defined plot and characters, and you have all the World Background you need.;,;.
Personal Feedback: I will not continue reading this story due to the content not being of interest to me, however, for those readers who enjoyed your novel, you should get back to it.;,;.
Score: WQ 4/5 SoU 3/5 SD 5/5 CD 5/5 WB 5/5
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Panqiuyan
Your story is great. I hate the prince already. If I was the main female I probably plot to get rid of him. I hope the prince gets what he deserves.
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LuoYeYouLing
Ok, I like how the story is progressing so far. I was about to browse through it quickly but found myself to be immersed in it. Ah! To think that this is a new novel and thus I am unable to finish reading it in one go. I'm going to keep this book in my collection.
Luo Ye
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Panqiuyan
I like your book. The story sounds amazing. I love how you describe the world. I like the characters. I like the names in this book. I hope you keep writing.
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Yuki_Qing
dear author, thanks for bringing up your idea on this story and share with us. this novel is interesting, like it :)
thank you so much for your hard work. hope can update frequently although real life is more important and top priority.
hope reader read this novel and recommended to others.
all the best and good luck to you author!
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seasongirl90
I need more. This book is getting really good. It makes me think of Bride of the Water God. Kind of similar to Goong/Palace. Not mention, the hero characters are all kind look alike
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Ierrech
5 stars for everything! Incredibly enchanting story; for men and women alike! Very magical; beautiful, poetic but direct and to the point!
Highly recommended for EVERY READER!
Please write daily! Don't worry too much about the proof-reading! I'm sure yaoyueyi or Take_the_Moon will be your proofreader :laughs:!
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Take_the_Moon
If I could I would score 1000!
Very good story!
The writing is impeccable and has a very good pace to accompany.
The description of the world is very good also and the characters, at least those that have already been presented, are very well made, full of interesting characteristics.
In my humble opinion, this author writes with propriety and with a charm, that very easily enchants who is reading.
Since it still has only three chapters, I can not say that I will read the story to the end, because I do not know what the plot will become.
However, from what I've read here, this story promises a lot! And for me it's being the best reading I've had this year, the lyricism is flawless and the description of both the characters and the environment is touching!
The author is to be congratulated and I very much hope she continues like this!
Xoxo
O_Ka_Moana