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A_Canadian
Honestly, This is such a good story and it has some very touching moments. But It is dropped and never had an update In ages. If you read this and get attached, I feel sorry for the fact that no new chapters are ever to be added to this entertaining and amazing story.
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Pav114
Well constructed characters and interactions with other stories, sadly it seems as though the author has disappeared on us. Looking forward to possibly new chapters in the future.
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Tsuna_Aotsuki
why did it drop?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Samien
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Oogami_ODRC
Nice story. The Choice of the worlds could be upgraded. The MC is good, arthur is one of my favourites whatever for of ledia he is starring in. Keep up the good work. Thanks for writing it was enjoyable.
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goldzi
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AkiraLight
Hey guys it's me king of Dreams. I got to say that this novel dosen't feel like a fan fic but feels so original from the Author, yes it is a fan fic, but doesn't really feel like it, as he builds up the character 'Arthur' so well, we all can't seem to hate him, for me there was no bad chapter, i forgot about cheeking for mistakes as i was so infested into the story. Just give it a try before you judge please.
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QueenMinari
Sir. Author when will you come back? I miss your work T_T
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DiligentKraken
It was a good novel I wonder why it stop updating chapters πππππππ€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€ππππππππππππππππππ
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Truelove_Story
WOW just WOW. .........,.........,.........,........,..........,.........,.........,.........,.........,,....,..........................
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lorko1234
Not bad.
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ThyIllusiveFossil
One of the better fan fictions that I have read. Well done...........................................................................
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pooptastic142
Even thought the story is a fanfic of multiple more popular novel the way we see him develop is fascinating and we can see that the deeper the story goes the more we live and relate to the character at first he was like a cool dude from some random novel but the more you read the more you love him .
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Assassin9999
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Kaung_Kaung_4496
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ame_fark
This is the best of proto saber fanfic I have read and honestly this is one of my fav fanfic. There are very little fanfic of proto saber than I hope for and the character development and personality of Arthur is very good compare to the one dimensional personality of other mc in this site
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cielcoal
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KindredSpirit
Author San are you dropping this book now? o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>o==[]::::::::::::::::>βοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈβοΈ»Μ·ΜΏβ»ΜΏββδΈ
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Ultimate_Slime
Love this novel sad that it is dropped but u should still read the parts that are out. Dissapointed but i get sometimes u just dont want to do it and lose inspiration on things.
P.S. pretty sure author sopped using web novel.
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Henrique_Paiao
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WhyDidTheChicken
This fanfiction. Reads more like a proper novel rather than a fanfiction. Arthur acts like a proper human. He has regrets and proper feeling it's a really nice getaway from the stone cold Mc. He isint 100 procent confident in himself and has real doubts and regrets about his life. The Mc is extremely well written. So well written that its better than 90 procent of all the other novel Mcs on here.
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One of my favorite scenes in the novel is when he gets reunited with his daughter. It shows a human side to him much more than most other characters. He is genuine in the way he apologizes to mordred. We get a amazing reunion and it isint dragged out.
One last thing please post more chapters or I'll kidnap you and force you to write in my basement.
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Huang_Bai_Lian
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BURNING
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Sahazel
Best fan-fic so far that I've read
Dude keep up with the good work
This is amazing. Please dont tell me you have dropped it please,please update update update
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Majeh7
don't give up this is a great novel......................................................................................................................................................
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Anonymous0007
IS THIS DROPPED OF IN HIATUS???
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xADx_kaneki
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