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Godofmischief243
the book is so perfect that I'm hoping you would make a sequel of it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Daoistwaterdrop
100 chapters in at the time of this review. This book is elite, highly recommend it to any prospective readers. the author has crafted a world that draws you in. Everything from the mc to the side characters and the world itself is attractive. No real major flaws this book will be receiving my stones and tickets.π
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aaron_harrison_4282
I love everything about this story from its comedic moments, to the charactersβ development, to the introspection. My only complaint is that I wish we could get more chapters more often.
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Eternal_Jiminii
This is an astonishingly good novel which insights curiosity, love and mystery. Feel free to try.......
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Drew_Sansone
So I mean. I finished volume 1. I have very mixed feelings about this. The world, story, development, mystery are all superb. The writing quality is excellent.
The update frequency is rather low but Iβm just glad they are still going.
Now for the negatives. It seems that every single person the MC becomes invested in emotionally or physically romantic or not just gets shipped off somewhere or dies. The first two women he liked they just moved and ghosted. The second romantic encounter he develops a strong bond and feelings with the woman for her to die in his arms.
I guess Iβd just like maybe one(?) partner whoβs and excellently written character to not be killed off as soon as they are fully fleshed out? Itβs just a downer and makes me not want to keep going because they made such interesting characters, and it would feel like a replacement or copy to have someone with a similar personality or way of talking.
Iβll keep going for the 2nd volume and hope it gets better in that regard because I truly do like the story and will update my thoughts at that point here.
Thank you author hope youβre well.
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SenpaiAinzz
author I've only read up to ch.170 but I'm really curious if the MC will have a way or chance to revive dead people in the future??depends on your answer author wether i will continue reading this or just drop it.i hope you could answer my curiosity
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generically
Some Female characters are over βsexuallizedβ. Like they too young it ruins the flow of the story
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Red_Ja
I love it .Its amazing how great the story is and to me the only problem would be getting a single chapter a week. But its understandable since this is such a great book and you need time to get the story together. HOPE YOU KEEP IT UP
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Crows_Uzan
I'll be honest the beginning of the story is quite interesting but the longer I read it gets boring. mc lives just running away, the typical coward mc who believes himself if he runs away his woman will be safe even though the woman can make a big organization with effort and practice, and mc barely never trained to increase his strength mc was just adventuring to find a new harem and get plot armor, and mc is a true hypocrite he always saves women be it bad or good and mc will ignore anyone as long as it's a boy. mc is a typical kid who thinks he's an adult because he's killed people. and for people who want to read this novel, make sure you really don't read any more novels because this novel is just to spend free time waiting for another novel to be released. I hope the harems that MC left behind get a man who has a backbone, not a cowardly kid, I hope this novel becomes an NTR so that other women can be happy instead of waiting for a stupid mc who travels the world looking for a new harem again.
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JKonnect
My only want for this novel is the rate at which h the author posts. I really wish the author would post more chapters. The story is great and has an over all balance to it.
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juicy_tender_steak
writing a review since I came back and binged some 30 stockpiled chaps. Still loving it, enjoying the ride the author has laid out for us. Comparing to others I've read, the writing quality, story development, character design and world background are all competitive. Had me drop my phone on my face due to laughter. I find it's been worth my time, maybe it's worth yours too
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Sinful_blessings
I hate how webnovel doesnt advertise the books which arent contracted, because this is by far on of the better books on this site. anyways, keep it up
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tatsuya_K_O_A
this is my honest opinion about this novel: i have expected more from it especially how it started, like how the mc was a loner and how mature he was for his age (the author proclaim him to be)and all those things. it all start to go down for me when kat died and instead of him getting more mature is almost like he's getting more childlike. he was given a mission from his grandfather to seek out his parrents and to get stronger, and honestly form me he hasn't been focusing on those things. its more getting girlfriends and when they leave him or when he needs to leave then all he feels is lonely and being worry almost all the goddam time. he's been traing for one and a half year and yet other just easily get to his level and by other I mean the girls.
so many ups and down that instead of making the story greater its just making it worst. one of the thing i hate the most is how long it takes for the mc to increase his strength. he also loses a hole year unconscious in some kind of spirit world and the benefits he got from that is not worth mentioning. last but not least his life and death is in hands of some blue hair girl till now I don't even know who the **** she is.
if you guys stil want to read it give it a try I'm even suprise at my self that i have read it till chapter 223 but to me its not that great. i will keep reading it just to see how it will end.
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ProfessorofCulture
this is a hidden gem. mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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TheGreatOne1
Honestly one of the best originals on this site. My only regret is that so few people get to see this masterpiece under the tons of fluff on the site, but since the author hasn't signed any contracts with Qidian to give away his story, hopefully he can make it into a book and have it published. Bless. Exp.
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Deus_Rex
I love this story. The character design is done well and most all of the characters are very interesting. The author is very good at getting emotions across in his writing as well. You hate who the author sets up as a villain and feel sad when you are supposed to. I would highly recommend this novel.
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