Reviews of System: Harry The Harem lord

First, let me say that I have no writing experience before this novel, so, if you are expecting great writing from the first chapter, then I have to disappoint you. Of course, my writing gets better with each passing chapter, which you can see and compare with the 14th chapter. After the 14th chapter, each one is getting better. A few points to note: The story is about young Harry, who gets the system and some memories, in Harry Potter World. I will be adding new characters (most of the girls, few boys for the sake of the story). There will be nine Horcrux, not seven. Each year will be somewhat different from the original. Harry's main goal is to become Harem Lord, so the story will focus in that direction, not on Voldemort. There won't be cultivation. book will focus on magic. I am giving my novel five stars not for the current chapters, but for the future. Before the novel ends, it will have the quality of five starts. Believe it! (sounds like Naruto😃) I am writing this novel to improve my writing skills. I appreciate all the help I can get. Please leave me constructive remarks to enhance my writing if you may. Thank you!

Nah Sorry the thing with Harry and his Aunt and a relationshipp, that may bee between them kinda put me of the story, simply No No Nooo, sorry...

The beginning is really interesting and the premise is excellent, but it continues badly. After reading chapter 12 I was unable to continue. Ok the harem, in fact I was very intrigued by a harem in Harry Potter, but it is very badly managed. A protagonist who only thinks about earning points and having fun, without thinking about the feelings of others. The story had taken a bad turn when he had chosen Petunia as his first target and he was only one year old ... but I was able to turn a blind eye, since he wasn't really a child. I can't rate the story too badly even though I dropped it, as it is well written, with good character descriptions. Personally I don't recommend it.

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all in all it's a damn good story but the fact that it's no longer updating is disappointing

im not gonna really dwell in to it but i was annoyed i was just here fpr the hermione ship but that is gonna take me a few day just to get there amd dont feel like skipping and befor you say im skipping to early made it to 44 and im done..

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Çok iyi olmuştu be dostum daha fazla bölüm göndwrseydiniz daha iyi olurdu. Yada sen yeni bölümlü bir hikayeye başla oda güzwl olur. Güzel kitap olmuş

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Keep the good work💼.................

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Overall it’s not a bad story, it’s engaging and draws you in out of curiosity. I think it needs to be edited better, specifically with transitions, some grammar, and possibly reworking the character development too.

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Great work man love it keep up Part i start reading

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I just finished reading this novel and I loved it. In the beginning there were grammar mistakes often, but as it went on they became less and less. The story is great and the creativity of the author is apparent. There were a few scenes with some women that were summarized that I would have loved to read about, but s/he’s the author. The explicit chapters are done really well and I can’t wait to continue reading!

Novel about a slag mc and a bunch of hoes when all the kids who go to the school start as 11yr olds... ah look endless paedophilia people wish to read about children screwing ... how low people have fallen