Reviews of System: Harry The Harem lord

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great_gamer
First, let me say that I have no writing experience before this novel, so, if you are expecting great writing from the first chapter, then I have to disappoint you. Of course, my writing gets better with each passing chapter, which you can see and compare with the 14th chapter. After the 14th chapter, each one is getting better. A few points to note: The story is about young Harry, who gets the system and some memories, in Harry Potter World. I will be adding new characters (most of the girls, few boys for the sake of the story). There will be nine Horcrux, not seven. Each year will be somewhat different from the original. Harry's main goal is to become Harem Lord, so the story will focus in that direction, not on Voldemort. There won't be cultivation. book will focus on magic. I am giving my novel five stars not for the current chapters, but for the future. Before the novel ends, it will have the quality of five starts. Believe it! (sounds like Naruto๐Ÿ˜ƒ) I am writing this novel to improve my writing skills. I appreciate all the help I can get. Please leave me constructive remarks to enhance my writing if you may. Thank you!
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yaya_sota
Nah Sorry the thing with Harry and his Aunt and a relationshipp, that may bee between them kinda put me of the story, simply No No Nooo, sorry...
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EspersLv6
The beginning is really interesting and the premise is excellent, but it continues badly. After reading chapter 12 I was unable to continue. Ok the harem, in fact I was very intrigued by a harem in Harry Potter, but it is very badly managed. A protagonist who only thinks about earning points and having fun, without thinking about the feelings of others. The story had taken a bad turn when he had chosen Petunia as his first target and he was only one year old ... but I was able to turn a blind eye, since he wasn't really a child. I can't rate the story too badly even though I dropped it, as it is well written, with good character descriptions. Personally I don't recommend it.
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IsekaiHentaiKakeru
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SageOfSevenSins
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Daoist4DOlJf
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Daoist552822
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sydwrld
all in all it's a damn good story but the fact that it's no longer updating is disappointing
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dao_of_lewds
im not gonna really dwell in to it but i was annoyed i was just here fpr the hermione ship but that is gonna take me a few day just to get there amd dont feel like skipping and befor you say im skipping to early made it to 44 and im done..
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Rainlink
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Lux_Tenebris_6370
Wtf๐Ÿ˜“๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿ‘‰๐Ÿง โœ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ“
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Ibadi_Demirci
ร‡ok iyi olmuลŸtu be dostum daha fazla bรถlรผm gรถndwrseydiniz daha iyi olurdu. Yada sen yeni bรถlรผmlรผ bir hikayeye baลŸla oda gรผzwl olur. Gรผzel kitap olmuลŸ
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Daoist721221
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abyss_of_darkness
Keep the good work๐Ÿ’ผ.................
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michael7022
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UchihaK_3128
Superb...Please update..Please update..Please update..Please update..Please update..Please update..Please update..Please update..Please update
1yr
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narniaaddict16
Overall itโ€™s not a bad story, itโ€™s engaging and draws you in out of curiosity. I think it needs to be edited better, specifically with transitions, some grammar, and possibly reworking the character development too.
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Sommerscave
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jose_perez_9317
Buena para ser una historia que tiene todo lo que uno pueda pedir y yo aca hablando para llenar huecos y podef dar la reรฑa๐Ÿ‘ˆ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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max360
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waraich
Great work man love it keep up Part i start reading
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angelus1989
Love it. Recomand it. You have to read it. โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ
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NH23kurogame
๐ŸŽ ๐ŸŽ ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐ŸŽ ๐Ÿ˜โ˜บโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐ŸŽ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐ŸŽ ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿ’’๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿข๐Ÿจ๐Ÿšž๐Ÿ’บ๐Ÿš„๐Ÿš„๐Ÿš…๐Ÿš…๐Ÿšค๐Ÿšˆ๐Ÿšˆ๐Ÿšˆ๐Ÿš…๐Ÿ’บ๐Ÿ’บ
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Dator_David
๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ™ƒโ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•โ˜•๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น
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Dator_David
๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿ˜น๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ
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Scott5431
I just finished reading this novel and I loved it. In the beginning there were grammar mistakes often, but as it went on they became less and less. The story is great and the creativity of the author is apparent. There were a few scenes with some women that were summarized that I would have loved to read about, but s/heโ€™s the author. The explicit chapters are done really well and I canโ€™t wait to continue reading!
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Rawr_Kitten
Novel about a slag mc and a bunch of hoes when all the kids who go to the school start as 11yr olds... ah look endless paedophilia people wish to read about children screwing ... how low people have fallen
1yr
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AnonymousX
Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel!
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AnonymousX
Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel! Great Novel!
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Thankyou_Po
The story is really great and also the plot The story is really great and also the plot The story is really great and also the plot The story is really great and also the plot
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