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4.35

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BobasaurusRex
Hey, this isn't really a review, I just wanted to ask. Are you planning to continue this novel? No joke. This was my favorite novel before you stopped uploading.
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Dominick_Ray
I love this story it is so interesting and it is easy to picture what is going on . I hope that this story gets into the top ten . ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„
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Morene_Firewolf
This is a wonderful book. I look forward to chapter updates and can not wait to see where the story leads to. Please do not drop this book.
2mth
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Morene_Firewolf
I will be seriously upset if this book gets dropped. Most good books seem to be dropped, though. I love the story and am excited to see the downfall of the city lord. I wonder if the city lord will be killed.
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niddaii
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Brokedepressed
Are you dead? Whatโ€™s up with all the authors just disappearing on this darn site. First they destroy any chance of earning free coins then they slowly get rid of other bonus goals and now half the authors are just dropping off the face of the earth. This site just gets crappier and crappier. You still alive Dawson
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Oofwa
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Progress Chapter 79; Overall rating: This is an amazing novel and I highly recommend this to those who want a book that's interesting, funny, cool, etc etc all the good stuff. Writing Quality: For the first 50 chapters? The writing Quality is good, but then it does a flip and some of the sentences are missing letters such as 'your', 'you're' being spelt 'you' but other than a couple spelling mistakes at the end it's good enough Stability of Updating: This one is one of the main reasoning this book isn't popular if the author had invested more into this book it would be amazing and really popular a lot of people love this story but the updating is too slow 8 months since last update I think the author dropped it? ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Story development: It's decent although he spends a lot of time leveling his skills, it surprises me that he hasn't had a higher level seeing as he spends his training killing monsters and such. Character design: ughh the words in the book loom beautiful. World Background: It's cool and I like how most of its in his perspective instead of every chapter being different people from different perspectives at the same time and place it gets boring when novel do that, good. It's upsetting that this novel doesn't get the popularity of deserves other than story updating 5/5 but with that it's saddenong
4mth
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audrey143
It is an amazing story. I am looking forward to the next update.
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LostDragon
I love this story just why is the author not updating anymore :( ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
6mth
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Hultzy
Hey, Author Dawson; I wanted to ask if you plan on continuing the story or dropping it altogether? The story overall is good. The background and world-building could use work. The characters need more depth to them.
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WildRage_
I love this story it is the only one I have reread on this site I just wish the author would update this again.
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BoredFml
This novel would get a 5 if it was still uploading. It is great novel and still worth the read even if it has stopped updating. This novel would get a 5 if it was still uploading. It is great novel and still worth the read even if it has stopped updating.
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Evil_Woman24
This is one of the best novel on this website and I love it. But I really hope that the author will come back and continue the novel, because I know that if he/she does continue it, it can be the among the ton 10 or even top 5. So please, please come back author.
7mth
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benrobjohnmcn311
WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS PLEEAASEEEEE other than that this is probably the best novel ive read but we need more chapters ASAP . The story is absolutely amazing and I recommend it to everyone .
7mth
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Hultzy
I truly enjoy this story. The bad thing is the author either dropped it or something like it. The author is writing stories still for webnovel, so that begs the question of what is going now?
7mth
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Shubit
I have to say it's one of the best original novel I have read in web novel, sadly it stopped updating, but it's still an nice book to start reading. The world building is amazing, sadly with some teaser and you will never now what will happen. And the characters are really good, quite often I though the main character moves and think quite logical, like an really person and not like some 2D character. It's and good read but sadly it stoped updating
7mth
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benrobjohnmcn311
The book has a very slow start but once it picks up you will fall in love with it. It is very funny , serious and everything in between . I personally recommend this book to all who havenโ€™t read it as it is amazing .
8mth
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benrobjohnmcn311
It is very good story but it doesnโ€™t really update regularly and that is sort of annoying.
8mth
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Piotr_Uklejewski
******************************* Awesome job! **************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
8mth
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Rodney466
The story overall is very good makes me wont to keep reading. The only problem I see is that the MC is to overpowered and keeps getting news beasts with little to no effort what so ever. I think if this continues it might make the story grow duller and boring. Leading to a drop in readers.
9mth
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nizan9182
One of my favorite stories its really sad tho that the author stop writing ...........................................................................
9mth
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Jormungandr181
A great novel that keeps you interested and having fun the mc is not boring and cut from the same cookie dough as the rest but the stability of updates is what holds this novel back if the updates were stable it would probably be in the top 20 novels.
9mth
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KingDraco
Just work on the grammar that is all I have to say other wise the book is good and I like how it is playing out so far you're doing a great job.
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Mystery_Dragon
Amazing story but the author stopped right during the story so I would rate it because of the story 50% good but because the author kept on stopping half way I would say it was a bit disappointing
10mth
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FallenXO
I love this novel and the story is so interesting I wish there were more chapter and there was more attention on it so the author would put more time into adding chapters.
10mth
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Peter_Corney
When is the next chapter going to be released it has been ages since there was an update even to let us know it's going to be awhile for the next chapter to be released
10mth
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Aaron_Stoino
Love the story! Glad to see a MC that doesn't follow the cliches you see in other novels. Only issue is I wish the upload speed could feed my addiction for it. ๐Ÿคค
10mth
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Rinina02
This novel is freaking amazing. The mc is awesome and is powerful but to the right extent. Not only that but the side characters are also super interesting and have personality. The romance is also cute. You can also see that the plot has so much more for the future. I really recomend to read it.
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DontWorry_BeHappy
Hey author Dawson, just wanted to know if u r alright. I looked in ur profile page and the last time you made a comment/reply/review was 2 months ago. I hope you are alright and if not that your situation improves. Good luck and thank you for the amazing read (keep it going plz)!
11mth
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CrownedC
5/5 No doubt
11mth
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