As the author... I kind of have to give this a 5 right? Call it biased rating, call it an attempt to increase my own rating. But of course... We all have to believe in our own works. For if we don't take pride in what we do... Why bother doing it?
This story has great pacing and writing. Sure, the first 2 chapters were confusing as heck, but everything gets cleared out fast. Not only is the main character great but also the side characters have flavor to them. The world built is rational and diverse which makes it easily accepted and can be immersed in. Emotional scenes were written smartly and not too drawn out. This made it easier to sympathize with the feeling the author probably wanted to convey while not being burnt out at the same time. All in all, a great read.
TLDR : Smart writing, Believable characters. 5/5 stars.
Dude I am in love with the world you have created and how complex everything is intertwined. I started this to kill time waiting in a doctors office and was hooked by the time I left. Keep up the amazing work. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
Brilliant novel. I love the premise and the story progression and honestly would have loved to continue but as a Nigerian it just doesnβt sit right with me. The overused trope of russia being the bad guys and AFRICA a continent reduced to a country is just vexing. Itβs probably personal but i canβt continue this novel.βπ½
nope, I'm done, really want to like this story but between the abysmal grammer/translation, he train wreck of a plot and plot holes the size of galaxies this story is officially unreadable.
One of the best novels there,
excellent world building, great characters, lots of mysteries and good grammar what more could a man ask for.
but need more chapters.
I am most definitely enjoying this book. Developing fairly quickly which I like. I will continue to support and up vote this book. yes I highly recommend giving this book a go.
This novel is amazing compared to other novels out there. It seems real not just words but a story of a great event in an alternate world, a story where every character seems real and has a story of there own.
Overall this is a great story! I enjoy the many different characters and the world building that goes on in this novel. My favorite character is Cliff haha and I have really enjoyed his character progression throughout the story and am always excited whenever he has some screentime (please have more chapters for Cliff to satisfy my craving lol) This was the first story that i have been invested in on this platform and will continue to support the journey!
I really must say that you did a great job there with the war crimes. Many stories doesn't talk in depth about these things, but you can clearly 'feel' the despair and atrocity behind these scenes and acts. This is war. It's not pretty, and you can't use morals to judge it. Killing mothers and childrens who happily use organs harvesting and pedophilia to support their live hood is never gonna be pretty and nice, but it is necessary for victory. They are losing and they need every edge possible against an enemy who have superiority in numbers, technology, lack of morals and tactics. So really, a great job here.
This is one of the most amazing books i have wver read. Continue the good job bro and continue writing this amazing book and story. To anyone reading this comment, you should definitely read this book.
I try this story by chance and I really don't regret it! It's complex but simple at the same time, the characters are interesting and develop well. The story have a good flow and is captivating
I really do like the story, but the writing has made this novel very questionable. The author decides to bring religion in to this (Not made up but actual religion from irl) and he states he wants to being Judaism into it for how ot can help the story and how he has no bias, bit this turns out to be a complete lie. In a few of the chapters he mentions how Jews are struggling to live in Jerusalem and how Palestine and all the Muslim countries are out to kill them but this is simply false. First off, to anyone who has read the news about this area, would easily be able to find out that Isarel has control over Palestinian and are attacking civilians and forcing them to move with violence. Palestinians are under threat by Israeli forces and not the other way around. Also many Muslim countries have good relations with Isarel and have struck deals benefiting Israel. There shouldn't be any reason to claim all muslim countries want to kill Jews because that's just made up by the author. It's not difficult to find this info so unless the author decided to write without any knowledge of the area it only seems possible he's doing this intentionally to put Muslims in a negative light. I have nothing against talking about religion but racism and lying about a group of people to make them look bad is not acceptable.
You can't do this to me man... I still have another novel to rush and now I found another hidden gem. I cannot finish hundreds in a day... It'll drained me. But for the sake of reading this fast. I'll rush the other. I look forward to this one... [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I can't say much but just not my cup of tea. Though the concept is very good I couldn't get motivated to read more. It's not that I don't like it but rather I don't have the motivation to read. maybe I'll do it later.
For me this setting had everYthing to make For aGreat Story, but the writing diDnt caTch me fast enough.
give it a try To see for yourself, dont expect S+ tho
Good concepts, world construction is okay, but writing quality makes the story so hard to read. Theres constant grammar mistakes that make the story impossible to read. Also dont bother over explaining every little detail when it just pokes more holes in your story. For example, beginning of the story it describes faster than sound movement due to increase brain perception. The problem with any form a acceleration in physics is force generated due to change in any velocity vectors. At that instant βspeed of soundβ would put an unrealistic g force load on the human body.
The name of the novel is a bit downer and doesn't do justice to its story, other than that, this is a good read for sure and not the time pass kind but a real good read. P.S.: I have read only till the first arc when I'm posting this so I might update this later
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