Reviews of Monster Integration by AnWan - Webnovel

I have read 3700+ chapters, honestly I don’t recommend you reading it it’s a waste of time you might ask why I reads 3700+ chapters and not giving up until now , will the start of the story is good and the events and progress is also good but when he ascends from his home world it’s kinda boring and repetitive events , slow progression in strength, lots of grammar mistakes , no new exiting events or anything. Just - need resources> enter ruins > fight and collect resources > add some hidden projects we don’t know anything about > progress a stage and repeat ( this cycle of action is started from early chapters till now ) then recent chapters he get kidnapped every 30+ chapters. No new event nothings. I gave up on hoping for something else

Just finished chapter 51 and left a comment, will leave it here as well as it fits the book so far, if he doesn’t fix it he’s a lazy writer. Onomatopoeia shouldn’t be in quotes by itself as it’s not considered speech, you can’t just put “cheering” if there is a cheering crowd because it implies someone spoke the word but if you put ‘The crowd was cheering’ by itself It would be correct so don’t put “laugh” as it means the hyenas are literally saying ‘laugh’ If trees are falling over I’m not going to keep repeating boom for every tree I might not mention it at all because nobody here is 2 years old and doesn’t know that big falling things go boom. Some might not know what a hyena sounds like so mention it once but that’s good enough most animals who aren’t ambush predators make sounds while attacking. Say something like; The cackling of the hyenas sent shivers down my spine as they surrounded and prepared to attack us, eyes glinting with amusement as they readied to play with their food. ( If you want to add the sounds then put the actual sound in the paragraph where you need it, you could start this first paragraph with HeeHeeHee! The cackling… A laugh is what it sounds similar to but it’s not, it is how they communicate) And maybe; One jumped at Bob from his blind side and he barely managed to dodge, sweat dripping down his back as the hyena attack passed by with a whoosh, Its claws lightly grazing his armour. (Even if it wasn’t a hyena but a made-up beast it will let the readers understand the creature's both terrifying and playful nature by themselves and it adds suspense and lets people understand the fear the character(s) feel towards them, if you want the beast to seem more powerful you could then change the end of the last paragraph to ‘It’s claws grazing his armour leaving four deep gashes’) Not “laugh” “laugh” “laugh” What is this? A comedy? I’m not laughing. (XD) When making fight scenes especially you need to give readers a sense of imagery that’ll lead to suspense/excitement/dread (or any feeling at all really), and any kind of repetition or just saying things like “laugh, clang, bang” repeatedly ( unless it’s a word spoken by the characters, like making a finger gun while launching your fireballs and saying “Bang” that’s fine) makes things boring. The same goes for any pets he might get, a dog doesn’t say ‘bark’ but it does bark. So say ‘The dog barked out of hunger’ (The dog is an example he doesn’t have a pet dog) A cannon goes boom but saying; The cannons lining the bastion roared like thunder as they repeatedly fired upon the ghost ships attacking the port, flaming balls of steel leaving trails of smoke in their wake. Sounds better than; The cannons on the bastion went boom, firing flaming balls as they hit the ghost ships attacking the port. It might not seem like much but these little differences will help keep your readers hooked as it adds a little spice and flavour that even they might not notice. (But mistakes are easily seen and criticized so as a writer you must be sure to learn from them) Also if English is not your first language or if your readers complain about the translation there are many free programs that can fix everything up, get one and find some friend(s) in your local writers' circle or someone else who is fluent with reading/writing in English to give it a look. Remember that writing is the same as fishing, to catch lots of fish (Readers) you need a good bait and an even better hook to keep them here, or they’ll spit out the hook and leave. I’ll finish the novel over time as I enjoy the concept but I’m taking a break from it as I’m a bit annoyed.

Inconsistent and messed up power system.Repetitive fights and chases.Sh*t romance.

I enjoyed the story. I can't wait until the MC's friend finds out he's dating her mom. Seriously needs an editor that knows fluent English. No offense to the author. I honestly believe his story would get a much higher ranking if he did.

Nice story altogether. Although there are gaps in the story like the main character doesn’t talk about the refinement tower is it not necessary now or has it changed or evolved again ? Still a good story though and I think the storyline of the side female character is good but I want them for the other characters too especially the main character sister .

A very good story with good stability in Stability of Updates and very good Character Design and World Background. When the story come to when he saved his world and start a new Journey it was a real good time to end the story and just left some plots unfinished, but the author preserve and now all the plots are being resolved one by one, like his partner.