one of the most disappointing fanfic, one of the great potential fanfic but go to waste, and one of the most useless mc in fanfic novels
P.S. author plssssss add the tag brainless mc, useless mc, and weak-ass mc
Well, i don't want to say this but this story doesn't have a story at all. MC is OP, he goes around the world beats people and done. Even if it doesn't follow canon at least there should be a story right??? If you want a great story then this isn't for you. you will be dissappointed.
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Just give up this hobby. no talent. Delete this account pls.
Im just dying reading this crap.
Zero comedy skills and awful story.
Those 5 star rating are not for this kinda crap of story.
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This is such an awesome novel. I have read many more of One Piece and this novel is the one that stood out more than what I read. I'm not saying that the other novels were bad but the plot, character, and involvement of this novel is so good.
One of the few Reincarnation stories that are truly written in the English language with proper dialogue and story progression even thou the character is a little op I enjoyed it and it is very funny :D Keep up the good work man !!!
I personally liked this novel very much but later on the character got overwhelming powerful. But please donβt drop it!!!!!
I just want to see him finalize his harem!
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The story is ok as it got a OP mc but the mc is kinda a retarded guy, the system is also annoying.
You can chose to read this or not from what I just said above
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I love it so much βββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
So it's a story where the mc die and obtain one system , become the administrator of that system. And then he take 6 years to create a body, choose to learn all the haki , BASIC swordsmanship , BASIC markamanship and he train for 3 and half a year with people (mihawk shanks rayleigh)............................ And then he choose to go sail the sea. The guy never really used the fu ck ing system which can literally make him a god, and he is literally as strong as whitebeard but he has to train not to control his power but to learn how to shoot etc? Uh i don't want to read it anymore :'(
Thanks for the novel author
Keep up the good work
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This is my very 1st fan-fic of One Piece and I am very happy that its this one because I loved it... more chapters more chapters more chapters... more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I say I loved this fan-fic, sure its not a novelty or something never seen before but that ainβt the point, what matters is what you do to make it interesting and fresh. The Mc is OP but well thatβs to be expected with a summary like that. I liked the original characters & their design which is why I gave 4 stars on βCharacter Designβ which is meant to symbolize the OCs only since this a fan-fic. I also like that the author isnβt afraid too evolve the MC in situations that will undoubtedly change the One Piece Timeline, And lets be real for a moment, who ever has read a fan-fic where the author donβt change the original Timeline at least a bit??? So for those who donβt like the changes then donβt read it, because this novel will shift towards the authroβs likes, dislikes and imagination. Of course, all of you have an opinion but it ainβt necessary to insult someone or alike for such things... Ah well thatβs just my opinion of course XD, great novel, hope its not dropped
CosmoLuz