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A slow-paced Xianxia with great world-building. The concepts of life are deeply explored by the author and the chapters set precedent for a great individual to be born within the storyline.
I especially like how the grandparents teach the child about the world through farming and daily lives.
Based on what I've read, the story is really interesting.. The tittle, the story, the characters everything! even the way of writing!! I hope you will continue writing in this way and excited for your future work!
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And the rest is history.
Style and Story are both excellent. The pacing is solid, neither moving too fast or dragging along. The background history feels rich but never infodumps.
Grammar is impeccable.
Characters are fun. Their dialogue flows with the kind of natural feeling that every author strives for.
This is a work that has been well-forged, blessed then delivered into our hands.
The story is well developed, with likeable characters, and superior world building. If you like cultivation, but hate how most people write it this is for you. It takes the tropes of classic xianxia and produces a very amazing novel.
I really don't know how much story is good or not but this one of the best i have read. I give 5 stars to story which i really enjoy and can't think of anything which can done to improve it . Its not something which is going to change you and your outlook on life or something it is just a very good story.
Style seems good. Narrator is also good.
Grammer . I can't find any mistake in grammers. If there are then i am not educated enough to find them.
Good start so far, very early stages of world and plot building but it only took an hour or so to read and I got some good laughs, give it a shot.
Style is good
Story is just getting started
Grammar is fine
Characters have some depth and have motivations/reactions to situations so not one track cardbord cut outs so thats nice.
Realy only thing holding this back is the lack of chapters
Good for some light reading
Believable characters and humor are the main strengths of this story, the author's visible improvement makes me hopeful.
I like to see improved more:
less breaking the fourth wall, things like: "then our hero...". should serve a clear purpose, like a zoom out function in a film that used haphazardly it beaks the immersion and often confusing.
The switches between what fang saying and what comes out are great. After 30 chapters I believe it's redundant to write both all the time.
The author certainly has a way of writing words that pulls a reader into their own world and doesn't let go easily. The detailed descriptions are like an added cherry to the top especially, since there are no grammatical errors in the story. This story is a way better than the normal run of the mill stories we get here on this site and its marvellous!
Very original beginning where MC is designed before his death, no classical "ugly/boring/untalented dude got hit by a bus, reincarnated to different world - ok now I will be strong (here barely MC introduction starts)". No plot-armor popping in every hard fight with miracle power-up friendship power. No harem-king ****.
My very first review about book, don't want to spoil so all I can say is - It's worth your time. My second best webnovel here right after ISSTH.
One of the best novel I have read so far, and I read a lot. story development is good, even tho the world building can be a little bit better, but so far so good. character design, is stable, meaning that the MC character, decision, temperament are align with his origin, and age. world background is huge for me. total score 5*
The best story ever. I love this story. Everything about this story is great. Is there any openining and writing better than this? This is as good as it get. Highly recommended by me if you love xianxia and wuxia genre of fantasy.
Excellent. I love this story. yeah it does everything great and I love it. I think its fun and clever most of the times, making me laugh. Over all I recommend it if you love xianxia fantasy or something really magical. its great.
Well, I write my first review on Original Novels on this novel
I Rate 5 because it truly deserve that .
Honestly among all of the Original novel there is hardly anything good in them. more than 99% of them have Grammar and spelling problem in a terrible way.
But this novel is truly good, not only Story is great and character design is good even spelling and grammar also nearly perfect and we can very very few mistakes in these two problem. Novel is nearly as good as translated novels. Story has great potential and if Author put time on it it'll become one of the best Novels. The Only flaw of it is the Updated Release that is slightly weak and this is the reason of low ranking of novel but inn my opinion the quality is more important that quantity.
So our good fellow Brothers read this novel and vote for it maybe Author release more.
Mark my words. This novel is going to be a classic of a novel. One of the greatest xianxia ever. People will look back on my comment and will remember this very day and realized yhat I have said it before. I rest my case.
The best opening to any book that I have ever seen. I continued reading out of curiousity and I wasn't disappointed at all. The novel is a classical masterpiece. The author is doing a yeo job on this novel. Thank you author.
Good stuff was a really interesting story I enjoyed reading it greatly. Sometimes the author just does things right you know. This is definitely one of those times. I hate when the author doesn't provide great content. But this content is premium.
The plot is really good, and you can see the improvement in the story as it progresses. The characters started to become more alive. The best way to describe this story was that it was a mix between the classics and the originals. There are many original ideas as well as fundamental ideas from the classical ones. Truly a well-written story, with good structure as well as a lot of information. The author provides a lot of details and shows his knowledge of what he know about life and cultivation clearly.
Although I used to read western fantasy, I couldn't help but get passionate about this story from the very beginning.
The protagonist is strong and brilliant and it's easy to step into his shoes!
I also really appreciated the way the author gives importance to the secondary characters, making them an integral part of the story.
I hope it will continue to upload chapters day by day!
Rate this book? Nothing less than five stars. Do you think you have heard cool martial names? Wait until you read this book. It's simply wonderful. The MC is really cool guy. The world is awesomely made and explained.
A cool novel if I must say. I like the concept of the novel with those different styles . The combat is so impressive. The writing is very good not too many mistakes. The MC is good too. Very good overall. Recommended
Story is good and gets interesting as I go through the next chapters.
Well I think this book has some potential and would for sure get into top books shortly.
Hope author keeps his release stability and make a grand end for the story.
And thnx for reading your chapters, it felt good.