Reviews of The Great Journey With a System by JRT02 - Webnovel

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Wow, i wonder why this old fanfic still have people wait for update. I understand now after i read it, this novel is really enjoyable However, even you change character appearance in to other Anime character but the Original character image from manhua in my mind is really strong ,so i can't feel the same way. If u make some your own original character appearance base on other Anime character, maybe it's good idea? I will wait your new update.

Actually, this novel is quite good, but unfortunately the story is a bit boring, plus the MC who leaked the secret of his strength was a bit cringe in my opinion

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Ceritanya sangat menarik untuk disimak.. Alurnya bagus dan saya memuji author dalam mengembangkan jalan ceritanya.. Saya menikmati,dan saya suka fanfic ini.. Jangan terlalu banyak memikirkan hinaan dan kritikan dari orang lain karena orang hanya bisa mengkritik tapi belum tentu mau membuat karya karya seperti ini... Tetap semangat 👍

Overall good, very good for a fanfic but it lacks character depth and a stable update rate of chapters. It's been 5 months at the time of this review. Really hope it gets updated but I feel like the author has dropped writing fanfics all together.

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Really poor storyline..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story was going pretty well in the beginning and I liked the concept of the system and the powers, but honestly the Mc is incredibly annoying. He basically sets up future problems for himself by making Yun Che his enemy and starts giving away op powers to people without much of a relationship. Everything seems so forced and at a certain point the Mc gets way too confident that it’s sickening. Like his relationships with every girl in the story is so cringe. There’s only any real character development with the Mc and it’s very small. Every girls personality is a run down version of ATG and having no depth. I will say that the writing quality was quite standard and easy to read, but there was definitely a lack of detail and originality that could have made this story a lot better.

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I like the novel fanfic and I've been waiting 2 months for an update. So I was wondering if this story is in Hiatus or Dropped??????????????

Everything was good, until you told jasmine about the system, that's when I packed up my bags and walked off of this story. Keep up the good work but I'm not reading again.

i really hate yun chen and hate his life choices and if i had a change to smack him i would but now i hate this mc as much as hate yun chen baised of his hypocrisy and his bashing on yun chen while he is or more stupid then him. who in the hell would and will tell other there secrets just after meeting them and why you need to prove your secrets to them just after meeting them. and if you want a harem just w8 and talk be their support or some shit no need to slip every thing about your self like a snitch, no need to have a dick measuring contest with your self and shot your self.

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Was cool Till dxd came in he Is itachi no need For iron man or turning in To a dragon Or the op first summon And to top it off telliNg everyone about his system got to chapter 39 If you like you lIke it if Not so be it just nOt my style started off good tho

If you like: - Stupid MC telling everyone his secrets - Stupid MC who have many system points and don't use it - Stupid MC that reveals he has a system - Stupid MC who use his system points in other instead of himself - Stupid MC who gift powers to other that can kill him - Clone f*cking the "harem" of the MC - Stupid author which his only answers for the sh*ts he does is *for future plot* Then... Enjoy the reading :)

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i agree, but i don't really know why mc is always going for beauties. i mean come on i know they are beauties but he should know when he crosses the line and by the later chapters, the beauties he had collected is kind of controlling him. like he should be the issei in wish of a dragon, where he doesn't care about beauties but their personalities, he doesn't manipulate but sympathize, pity, or help out of kindness in their lowest because he has been there. like the mc saves one life and given another chance but becomes bad in the second chance. it is a wish fullfillment story but why does he listen and accept the insults of his lover. i mean he should dominate the relationship, he is what keeps the relationship stable. it would be fine if he acts like the mc in overluck mc, because the mc in overluck mc is he doesn't let his emotion control him. he manipulates them in being loyal, he doesn't care about *** or things like lust because he doesn't let it control him. he only wants someone who is loyal like yanderes. yanderes are the most loyal person if it is controlled. the mc is like issei but does not let is show in his face. author-san please have a chapter for character development where he will change his ways.

Dear author i really like this book. LIKE REALLY LIKE it please dont drop this although i csnt support you via patreon....i could only give you two stones per day iam sorry

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NOICE i really like the system works ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ....................hmmmm......... .....................what?.............

Where to start....hmm for one this book is actually good without the author being a try hard. Its fun and worth reading really. Take ATG and remove its unnecessary filter genocidal aspects and boom here it is. For those who want ATG char with more life and personality this is one for you. And a request to author if he ever reads this please update even one chap a week i aint gonna complain cause i genuinely like this book.

The writing in this story is decent, with some what stable updates. The idea is great but poorly executed. It is like the strongest people of 10 different anime becomes one with no weakness. Everything goes his way and MC doesn't really a have defining characteristics. When there is no goal/challenge for him then it is bland. He doesn't really need to follow canon at all he get most of the girls in chapter 10. The story has good aspects but No real plot. He gets everything and everything is overpowered making one confused how many powers he had. He even forgets his powers (I remember he has tremor tremor fruit?). Everyone of his powers is unbeatable, so there is no need for fighting scenes. Amaterasu any thing is dead. Sharingan everyone is in genjutsu. MC is really not the lead role in story, Jasmin says stand up he stand up, sit down... If she asks question he answer like a slave, as for food he is a chef, she asks for powers he says thank you after she receives his gift. He goes everywhere telling people that he is from another world, which is not something terrible but not good either. But it is always leaf village this and that. "Senju clan and uchiha clan" sounds like old people that goes on and on about how things where at the past. Then he goes and explains everything to Jasmin. To see Yinger's face she forces him to give her power. WTF how stupid can he be, you go to god realm and you will know how she looks. One of the most stupid reasons and trades I have seen. If it was I like Jasmin and I will give her these powers it would be OK. But he gets blackmailed for the stupidest reason. I cant... I just can't... plus it's her enemy and she wants his help and make it sound like she is doing him a favour. again he is living for jasmin's command. He wants to take the moral high group against Yun Che but forces him to watch as he sleeps with his future wife. He manipulates his women to get to him does not really seem like Author just has a grudge against Yun Che. He tortures and kills people and many more questionable deeds but still claims to be better as if he some sort of saviour. His wishy washy character is unrelatable. It has got good ideas. I liked everything in the beginning. But his powers were too strong, not a problem but makes the fighting boring random stuff then it is mangakyo and win. He shows devil fruit power to people for no reason "I can control people?" why would he do that. The MC and his actions are just too in coherent for me to continue past 30 chapter. Good luck.

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this is good but i just don't like the idea of him spilling tea's, i know it's not that dangerous but he should tell them more once he gain far more stronger strength.

Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhh awesomeeeee fanfic bruh it was funny, entertaining and awesome. Man you created such a f$$$ing Dope novel and the amazing part of it is the system. Your system focused around the naruto jutsu and stuff which I appreciate plus the use of the sharingan and magekyo sharingan abilities was delivered perfectly!!!! Bruh your awesome keep it up!!!!!!! And I loved how the MC cuckolded the sword sect master hahahahah and The use of thor's hammer was genius man it was genius. Bravo Bravoo.

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enjoyed reading it for a fanfic of a novel Ive never read every before or even know what it's really about, I can actually follow along pretty well.