Was cool Till dxd came in he Is itachi no need For iron man or turning in To a dragon Or the op first summon And to top it off telliNg everyone about his system got to chapter 39 If you like you lIke it if Not so be it just nOt my style started off good tho
If you like:
- Stupid MC telling everyone his secrets
- Stupid MC who have many system points and don't use it
- Stupid MC that reveals he has a system
- Stupid MC who use his system points in other instead of himself
- Stupid MC who gift powers to other that can kill him
- Clone f*cking the "harem" of the MC
- Stupid author which his only answers for the sh*ts he does is *for future plot*
Then... Enjoy the reading :)
i agree, but i don't really know why mc is always going for beauties. i mean come on i know they are beauties but he should know when he crosses the line and by the later chapters, the beauties he had collected is kind of controlling him. like he should be the issei in wish of a dragon, where he doesn't care about beauties but their personalities, he doesn't manipulate but sympathize, pity, or help out of kindness in their lowest because he has been there. like the mc saves one life and given another chance but becomes bad in the second chance. it is a wish fullfillment story but why does he listen and accept the insults of his lover. i mean he should dominate the relationship, he is what keeps the relationship stable. it would be fine if he acts like the mc in overluck mc, because the mc in overluck mc is he doesn't let his emotion control him. he manipulates them in being loyal, he doesn't care about *** or things like lust because he doesn't let it control him. he only wants someone who is loyal like yanderes. yanderes are the most loyal person if it is controlled. the mc is like issei but does not let is show in his face. author-san please have a chapter for character development where he will change his ways.
Where to start....hmm for one this book is actually good without the author being a try hard.
Its fun and worth reading really. Take ATG and remove its unnecessary filter genocidal aspects and boom here it is.
For those who want ATG char with more life and personality this is one for you.
And a request to author if he ever reads this
please update even one chap a week i aint gonna complain cause i genuinely like this book.
The writing in this story is decent, with some what stable updates.
The idea is great but poorly executed. It is like the strongest people of 10 different anime becomes one with no weakness. Everything goes his way and MC doesn't really a have defining characteristics. When there is no goal/challenge for him then it is bland. He doesn't really need to follow canon at all he get most of the girls in chapter 10.
The story has good aspects but No real plot.
He gets everything and everything is overpowered making one confused how many powers he had. He even forgets his powers (I remember he has tremor tremor fruit?). Everyone of his powers is unbeatable, so there is no need for fighting scenes. Amaterasu any thing is dead. Sharingan everyone is in genjutsu.
MC is really not the lead role in story, Jasmin says stand up he stand up, sit down... If she asks question he answer like a slave, as for food he is a chef, she asks for powers he says thank you after she receives his gift.
He goes everywhere telling people that he is from another world, which is not something terrible but not good either. But it is always leaf village this and that. "Senju clan and uchiha clan" sounds like old people that goes on and on about how things where at the past.
Then he goes and explains everything to Jasmin.
To see Yinger's face she forces him to give her power. WTF how stupid can he be, you go to god realm and you will know how she looks. One of the most stupid reasons and trades I have seen. If it was I like Jasmin and I will give her these powers it would be OK. But he gets blackmailed for the stupidest reason. I cant... I just can't... plus it's her enemy and she wants his help and make it sound like she is doing him a favour. again he is living for jasmin's command.
He wants to take the moral high group against Yun Che but forces him to watch as he sleeps with his future wife. He manipulates his women to get to him does not really seem like Author just has a grudge against Yun Che. He tortures and kills people and many more questionable deeds but still claims to be better as if he some sort of saviour. His wishy washy character is unrelatable.
It has got good ideas. I liked everything in the beginning. But his powers were too strong, not a problem but makes the fighting boring random stuff then it is mangakyo and win. He shows devil fruit power to people for no reason "I can control people?" why would he do that. The MC and his actions are just too in coherent for me to continue past 30 chapter. Good luck.
Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhh awesomeeeee fanfic bruh it was funny, entertaining and awesome. Man you created such a f$$$ing Dope novel and the amazing part of it is the system. Your system focused around the naruto jutsu and stuff which I appreciate plus the use of the sharingan and magekyo sharingan abilities was delivered perfectly!!!! Bruh your awesome keep it up!!!!!!! And I loved how the MC cuckolded the sword sect master hahahahah and The use of thor's hammer was genius man it was genius. Bravo Bravoo.
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it's all I ever wanted all anime power ups in a cultivation world with a system you could lessen the harem part but I know it's in against the gods world so you would include that part so it's bearable but I liked the system and mc is somewhat likable too just could you please reduce his(mc) character description every time someone new sees him (black akatsuki dress with pony tail....etc etc .)
Gread read, but when i read chptr 66 well that was a great disapointment when you let MC clone do the girl, i was thingking before this chptr that the author was not gonna let the clone do the girl when the MC let the princess alone when he seduce the fairy, if you gonna let the clone do the girl then why are you let the princess alone? Just sent a clone to do her so that the princess not lonely, and if the MC really don't mind about the clone do it with his girl then i think there are some chptr in the future that Will get the girl get gang banged by his clone, if you cannot satisfied your girl with one D then don't get a Harem in the first place.
Anyway gonna drop this fanfic novel, but it was interesting idea remembering the original novel was full of drama and already drop it long time ago.......
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